Recent Comments

9/26/20, 8:29 PM
I wonder if the chief will and Jake will get caught too
9/26/20, 8:09 PM
there is a few grammar errors, but it's very interesting and pretty hot. =)
9/26/20, 7:47 PM
I'm not used to you ending a story on a cliffhanger. But I like where this one is going!
9/26/20, 7:14 PM
I think Hypnoguy12 is on to something; Ashton is constantly watching and seeing things so he could be the key to undoing things. He could watch and learn enough to undo his prison. With Lovecraft Country being so on the minds of a lot of people (myself included), you could think along the lines of the Count of Monte Cristo or maybe Shawshank Redemption and have Ashton breaking out of the prison of his own mind and getting revenge on Thomas for all that he's done.
Anonymous
9/26/20, 5:54 PM
I'm hard. Great story!!!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/26/20, 5:13 PM
I wish I could be put under like this. I also like ideas of being kept in one of my football uniforms & maybe being made to go to a gym to do forced workouts while in gear, helmet & all. Maybe one day this will happen to me without me even being aware of things.
9/26/20, 5:03 PM
I read the first chapter on AOO and really enjoyed it, so im happy to see the continuation here! Thanks for finishing it! looking forward to the continuation of Breaking boys
Peter
9/26/20, 5:01 PM
Wow. Crazy hot story. Aching for the next chapter.
Jason Zhang
9/26/20, 3:56 PM
Glad to see the series continued great stuff!
9/26/20, 3:22 PM
Nipples and milking and vampires, too? I'm in for this ride! GREAT story!!!