Recent Comments

9/26/20, 10:02 AM
loved the story can't wait for the next chapter
Anonymous
9/26/20, 9:29 AM
great story loved how he was aware and struggled i could have read that decent all day! continue!
9/26/20, 9:22 AM
Nice! I love stories with an oblivious narrator.
9/26/20, 7:23 AM
I live to serve the Virus
9/26/20, 5:00 AM
Ive had this hypnotized into kissing ass as if it were a real person fantasy floating around my head for awhile now, very happy to see it in a story!
9/26/20, 4:52 AM
This is excellent - thank you for writing it! I hope to see more from you on this theme soon.
Elm
9/26/20, 4:11 AM
loved it!
Leo
9/26/20, 3:35 AM
Are you okay? I miss seeing your sexy stories on here :(
9/26/20, 2:08 AM
so hot! your stories are always really creative, and sexy. the boss should make him crave his farts in the next entry.
9/26/20, 1:42 AM
@The Influencer what maybe you can do is bring in another professor or somehow Charles gets back a little memory of all of the knowledge. There has to be somewhere or something Thomas missed. Most of the time there is a little thing you can do like in the next chapter(if there is one) to set up a fault for Thomas or something he truly screws up on. Every good villain has an equal match. Maybe because Ashton is always watching him take people under he starts to pick up on stuff and techniques, or someone else can be watching through the window and eventually gets the nerve to help. Think of something little that can throw off the entire plan and build up to it. Keep on having Thomas taking someone new under but also start building up the story of his down fall. You got this! If you want to brainstorm ideas I would love to help!