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9/25/20, 9:30 PM
> Finally, the army guys are back and Devin is so in their sights. I could see him like the deputy is with the sheriff; that might be the best option. > It might be. It all comes down to available time. When I looked at the overview, chapters 10-14 all take place over the course of one day. (You will see it gets later and later in that day as the chapters move along.) Chap 15-16 are the next full day, 17 is the day after that, and 18 is a (time) transitional chapter (but within a few days) and I wrap up Book Two in 19. With the amount I need the Super Soldiers to do -- and the limited time I have for them to do it in -- I don't know when they'd have time to transform Devin. But as I said before, I've come to like Devin, so I don't want to shit on him...
9/25/20, 8:45 PM
I'm excited to read more of this! Your stories are very well-written. Can I ask if you have any inspirations for the stories you've written?
9/25/20, 8:24 PM
please have Thomas somehow get a taste of his own medicine. It is super hot to see him have all of this control but it will get old real fast if he had no challenger or anything to progress the story.
9/25/20, 8:08 PM
Finally, the army guys are back and Devin is so in their sights. I could see him like the deputy is with the sheriff; that might be the best option. But I'm looking forward to see where you're going with this ride. Definitely looking forward to seeing how the army guys get out and who they convert along the way.
A
9/25/20, 7:35 PM
sad he didnt put the key through the hole as tribute...
9/25/20, 7:14 PM
I've wondered if Travis is oblivious to how Andy is benefiting from Travis's subliminal messages. Another hot chapter!
Anonymous
9/25/20, 7:04 PM
super hot! Cant help but wish that Thomas gets a taste of his own medicine
Urboijer
9/25/20, 6:43 PM
i am so hard reading this!
Anonymous
9/25/20, 6:30 PM
Really happy about the update
9/25/20, 5:01 PM
Good story, and a fun take on a classic idea. I'm a sucker for hairy men, and don't usually enjoy shaving, but using it as a measure of their "alpha male" status and resistance made it very satisfying to read. Just those little hints of free will growing back along with the small traces of hair, so when he shaves it off again, all those little thoughts and memories get cut off too and he can go back to being a good boy.