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9/26/20, 7:23 AM
I live to serve the Virus
9/26/20, 5:00 AM
Ive had this hypnotized into kissing ass as if it were a real person fantasy floating around my head for awhile now, very happy to see it in a story!
9/26/20, 4:52 AM
This is excellent - thank you for writing it! I hope to see more from you on this theme soon.
Elm
9/26/20, 4:11 AM
loved it!
Leo
9/26/20, 3:35 AM
Are you okay? I miss seeing your sexy stories on here :(
9/26/20, 2:08 AM
so hot! your stories are always really creative, and sexy. the boss should make him crave his farts in the next entry.
9/26/20, 1:42 AM
@The Influencer what maybe you can do is bring in another professor or somehow Charles gets back a little memory of all of the knowledge. There has to be somewhere or something Thomas missed. Most of the time there is a little thing you can do like in the next chapter(if there is one) to set up a fault for Thomas or something he truly screws up on. Every good villain has an equal match. Maybe because Ashton is always watching him take people under he starts to pick up on stuff and techniques, or someone else can be watching through the window and eventually gets the nerve to help. Think of something little that can throw off the entire plan and build up to it. Keep on having Thomas taking someone new under but also start building up the story of his down fall. You got this! If you want to brainstorm ideas I would love to help!
9/26/20, 12:18 AM
Daddies are always a turn on for me! Great Work!
9/25/20, 11:18 PM
The new fetish and bits of sadistic fun here are delicious. (Also loved the gaslighting style of trance in the last chapter.) Good stuff!
9/25/20, 11:11 PM
Thanks for the feedback. I originally intended for this to be a one-shot, but people responded well and I had this idea to continue it. I don't love stories like this because it does just spiral out to the point of being excessive. I don't have a clear idea of where to go with this and I can't think of how Thomas would end up losing, which I agree ought to be the case. I also don't want it to be a "victim of the week" kind of story, because that becomes boring. On the other hand, I really like writing for Ashton and think their dynamic is interesting. No concrete plans to continue at this time, but I'll write other chapters if I come up with anything good.