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9/25/20, 5:01 PM
Good story, and a fun take on a classic idea. I'm a sucker for hairy men, and don't usually enjoy shaving, but using it as a measure of their "alpha male" status and resistance made it very satisfying to read. Just those little hints of free will growing back along with the small traces of hair, so when he shaves it off again, all those little thoughts and memories get cut off too and he can go back to being a good boy.
9/25/20, 4:22 PM
Thanks for your comments and ratings :) @Anons. I'm glad that you like that duality between "Alpha" Bob and slutty Bob. I agree, it's hot that way. :) @Edlam. I love your stories so it means a lot that you enjoyed this story :) thanks. @Heru Kane. I'm glad that you liked this chapter. I had a lot of fun writing those scenes and finally I gave you a good rimming scene (I think lol). With Michael I had some ideas but yes, the hungover it's good plan ;) @BobbyBlobfish. Lol, I agree it's kind of funny those "straight" people having sex with other men and doing a lot of mental gymnastics to keep his "masculinity" intact.
9/25/20, 3:55 PM
oh wow,that was simply beautiful
9/25/20, 3:30 PM
ugh,I enjoyed this chapter a lot! I'm so happy for... Mike? doesn't matter. I'm so happy for boy that he's happy,horny amd obedient
Rio
9/25/20, 3:27 PM
Спасибо вам за этот красный рассказ!
9/25/20, 2:56 PM
> I think Part 49 would have been hotter if it was told from the perspective of the waiter, and we only got overheard snippets of the Lenoldis’ conversation. > Valid point-- and I agree. I have discovered that POLLINATION works best when told from the victim's POV. At the time I initially plotted this scene, my intent was that it be from the waiter's perspective. But to be honest, I've been enjoying the Lenoldi's relationship and I thought the insight into the Father's motivation/ philosophy was important for plot developments later. It was all too subtle to be captured by the waiter overhearing stuff. Next chapter, you'll meet the hapless Willis, and I think that will get us all back on track with the way this narrative works most successfully. > The part with Devin especially. > There are certain new characters that I'm really enjoying: Rugby Boy, Vance, Willis (for comedy relief), and poor Devin. The fact is I haven't figured out the end of Devin's story -- I have two options for him, one good and one expected. The "good" ending will inconvenience the plot -- the "expected" ending (the ending I initially plotted) will disappoint Devin fans. (And I admit, I'm a Devin fan. I've really come to enjoy working with the character, so I'd like to keep him around. You know, expand the cast a little further.)
9/25/20, 2:32 PM
Loving this! The part with Devin especially. I'd love to get more parts from the perspective of the still-transforming men; for instance, I think Part 49 would have been hotter if it was told from the perspective of the waiter, and we only got overheard snippets of the Lenoldis' conversation.
Zac
9/25/20, 2:24 PM
Damn, that ending was *hot!*
9/25/20, 2:21 PM
oof,the working out in his suit part got me more than I thought it would. A story perfect for my taste
9/25/20, 2:08 PM
I'm so glad you've started a sequel :-)