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1/12/25, 4:15 AM
I hope we see what happens to the twink.
1/11/25, 9:52 PM
Clearly Mike was subdued without his consent. In real life the vast majority of us would judge this harshly. Consent is such a cornerstone of the BDSM world. Yet for me and clearly for others as well, Mike's being taken against his will as a fantasy element of a fictional story is incredibly _hot_. I have to wonder about this dichotomous reaction. For me i suppose a non-consensual power exchange in fiction is hot because it seems to emphasize the almost absolute power, dominance, and control of the Dominant in the situation. Of course in fiction there is no fear of real harm to anyone, so in a submissive reader's mind that fast transition from consciousness to unconsciousness, from having control to having none, involves only the excitement of the power exchange. This element of rapid power exchange with surprise and some degree of trepidation (if not mild fear) can in my mind be somewhat duplicated through prior "consensual non-consent" agreement, which allows a Dominant the freedom to surprise His submissive with more extreme unplanned BDSM "scenes". Personally i think that could help immensely to keep the BDSM/kink aspects of a D/s or M/s relationship interesting. That all said, i am pretty much a neophyte in the BDSM scene still hoping to make this kind of connection with a Dom/Master. So please take all my thoughts on this with a grain of salt. (You all have my consent to beat me up on this, Sirs. ;)

1/11/25, 11:07 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I totally get this. My previous story, Birth of a Bimbear, goes more on the idea that the guys involved are more willing to be changed. That was important to me for that story. But after that I got more into my "evil tist" fantasy and wanted to go darker. In real life Amir would be a very dangerous person. But he's fun to fantasize about.

1/12/25, 3:00 AM
@[Pup Don](/user/show/14787) In real life things get more complicated. That's partly the attraction of fiction; we can ignore the complexities. I love that you get into your dark and "evil tist" sometimes. Admittedly i do hate stories where the bad guy is a mean hurtful narcissistic sociopathic son of Satan. Other times I love stories where the (not-so-)bad guy wins! And absolutely Amir is a very fun guy to fantasize about!! Amir may not have been entirely clear what he was up to, but he did keep his harem happy!! Thanks again for a great read!
1/11/25, 6:17 PM
This really good, I can't wait for chapter two

1/12/25, 12:30 AM
@[FaggyBaby](/user/show/525906) Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
1/11/25, 3:33 PM
I can't imagine what was going on in Gabe's mind on the mountain top. But I hope he heard Raz's unintentional moan that night. What a fascinating, Poe-ish tale. I was expecting a moral, like using a medieval chastity cage. But that would've been too on the nose.

1/11/25, 11:48 PM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) thx ;) well i think Gabe was too innocent to realize how sexy he is. i have a plan to share a few generated pics about them, but still dont know when.
1/11/25, 5:10 PM
I'm curious if Austin will go too far and get dragged into the coaches schemes too.

Anonymous
1/11/25, 9:56 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) That is what I am thinking.
Island Jock
1/11/25, 8:53 PM
More, more, for the love of Pete, we need more!
1/11/25, 8:04 PM
Hi all. I will weigh in as well, if I may. @[Hypnofiend23](/user/show/2528896) , please desist from leaving any more comments on this story, both anonymously and not. I'll reach out to you later at your e-mail to continue this conversation privately about your commenting history on the site. (Please also feel free to ping me via the forum system if you'd prefer to have that conversation there, rather than via e-mail.) @[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) , thank you for working with Soren to make the needed edits to the story—I know some of the site rules can feel semi-arbitrary from a writer's perspective... So we really appreciate the extra work you put in to accommodate us, and your professionalism. Thank you!! This story completely fits our site rules as it currently stands. The specific rule in question is perhaps vaguely phrased, and I will aim to fix that shortly. An approver made a human error—we are all human. We make mistakes sometimes and it is no big deal. We fix things up, and move on. _None_ of this merited how ugly and escalatory the response was by certain commenters. I will not abide any further shit-slinging in this story's comments. Thank you everyone for your patience as we worked on dealing with this. Please do reach out (either by pinging me at the forum, or by e-mailing via the admin inbox at admin@gaykinkystories.com) if you have questions, or any concerns. I'd like to move further conversation there, so as to avoid spamming Jack's comments needlessly.
1/11/25, 7:44 PM
Wow! What a glowing review. Thank you so much. I’m an older bear so I do not really have the makings of a femboy myself so this is totally me living out my femboy fantasies through my characters. I haven’t written anything in a while. But I’m hoping to get back into it soon.
1/11/25, 7:19 PM
I am not quite sure how i could be of use to Amir since i seriously doubt i have the requisite starting point to become either a femtoy or a fembull. My features are just too masculine to be made into an attractive femtoy and I'm too much a bottom boy to be a fembull. Still, Amir's total dominance and control and His means of establishing and maintaining them are just so so hot, i am already in love with Him. Of course while i can't praise Amir's dominance enough, i would be remiss if i didn't comment on how well Pup Don describes Amir's toys' beautiful transformations and their absolute submission, obedience, and service. Amir's hyper-intelligent, thoughtful approach to his toys' transformations based so much on their pre-existing personalities is impressive. i already deeply admire and worship Amir. Perhaps Amir could use me as a test subject for improving his control techniques. If Amir has any sadistic tendencies, perhaps i could learn to be a satisfactory masochist. i definitely have service submissive tendencies. i would love to be His houseboy/slave -- to cook and clean for His new family, and please Amir in whatever way i am able. In lieu of those options, please please, Pup Don, at least write more chapters about Amir's happy harem, including of course what Amir decides to do with Brice. Meanwhile, @Pup Don, thanks so much for your wonderful creation!