Recent Comments

9/24/20, 9:32 AM
very hot. can't wait for the next chapter.
9/24/20, 8:01 AM
The John Mulaney/Pete Davidson slash fiction I never knew I needed in my life.
9/24/20, 7:12 AM
Very hot chapter--especially the gym stuff! I'm a bit confused that Michael's now suddenly incredibly tall, but I'm willing to go with it.
Evan
9/24/20, 7:06 AM
Beautiful pacing, fantastic concept and writing. Bravo! And hot to boot.
hola
9/24/20, 7:02 AM
it was a sweet ending, but felt like a deus ex machina. kinda wouldve loved to see the friend get in on it but even i cant deny that it was cute as fuck. so good job :)
Lusty Stallion
9/24/20, 6:39 AM
Absolutely loved this man! Great building and developing of the story. The description was immense. Looking forward to the next one
9/24/20, 5:59 AM
A good start to an interesting story. One technical note: It's a bit odd the story is written in present tense, considering it's written like a diary which I think is a great way to present the transformation. Since he'd be writing these entries after the fact, I think past tense would fit better.
Anonymous
9/24/20, 3:25 AM
Omg so hot!
9/24/20, 2:14 AM
Above it all, I wanna say, Ronan filled my heart with joy. Thank you for sharing your story, it was a great ride once it got going. Looking forward to your next series.
9/24/20, 1:52 AM
Awesome first chapter! I look forward to what happens next.