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9/24/20, 12:11 AM
OMG MORE PLEASE
Anonymous
9/23/20, 11:32 PM
I have to agree with what was already said in previous comments. You have a knack with words that transported me to your protagonists' world which you so vividly described. In this piece of literature, there IS sex but you elevated it to include passion and romance in my opinion. VERY well done. I will be looking forward to reading more of your writing.
Lusty Stallion
9/23/20, 9:50 PM
Great work man. Having grown up in the UK I enjoyed the references. A quick proof read would have smoothed out spelling issues for your non-UK readers, but I knew whst you were saying. Poor Dan, but then the Genie is mean. Great work man!
boy Jason
9/23/20, 9:49 PM
Love the story. Very well written. Was kinda hoping for an ending with Steve having already reprogrammed by the Doctor, and get activated just as he was about to leave with the new Evan.
9/23/20, 8:07 PM
This is one of my fave stories on here, and one I've returned to a few times since you've posted it. I thought it was extremely well-written, and would love to see more in this vein.
9/23/20, 8:01 PM
Super excited to see what develops from here, and thought this chapter was really well-written!
9/23/20, 6:34 PM
Please tell me there's more. I'd love to learn more about the white noise machine, Travis, and see how Andy trains Ian.
9/23/20, 6:31 PM
chapter 2 please. that was a great set up
9/23/20, 4:13 PM
I always love a genie and twisted wishes, really like the concept that the Genie isn't some all knowing, god like being but more of a thug that can intimidate wishes!