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9/23/20, 8:01 PM
Super excited to see what develops from here, and thought this chapter was really well-written!
9/23/20, 6:34 PM
Please tell me there's more. I'd love to learn more about the white noise machine, Travis, and see how Andy trains Ian.
9/23/20, 6:31 PM
chapter 2 please. that was a great set up
9/23/20, 4:13 PM
I always love a genie and twisted wishes, really like the concept that the Genie isn't some all knowing, god like being but more of a thug that can intimidate wishes!
9/23/20, 4:05 PM
I'm hoping another sequel of smoke and nip grow. That was amazing!
9/23/20, 2:11 PM
Friends and guys, apparently there's A NEW GAY DATING SITE! We definitely can never get enough of those... I'll let the admins know this exciting news is filling up the c. They're gonna be so pumped, bros, you don't even know.
9/23/20, 4:50 AM
Some great "misinterpreted" wishes. Please continue.
9/23/20, 4:38 AM
Somebody needs to do a side story about Beau and Tracy after the ride!
Nutiper
9/23/20, 4:28 AM
Ooh, there's something intriguing about the baroqueness and insularity of Antony's narrative — like, he's almost an unreliable narrator in the way he filters the world through his specific perspective. I bet there are some details he's straining out with his filter, omitting them just because he doesn't find them relevant or worth his attention... and we'll never even know what was omitted. (For example, the party could literally be happening in the past at Warhol's Factory or at Studio 54, and Antony wouldn't really notice, or think it relevant to bring up in his narration, because he's seeing the progress of time + our cultural signposts in a very different way than we would...) This whole thing made me *so* curious what the next chapters would be like! I could see it going one way if it sticks to Antony's voice; this gradual enfolding of Blake into the world and perspective of Antony's voice... And I could see it going another way if it switches to Blake's POV for the next chapter, and gives us this brisk, flipped, contemporary perspective on Antony (what would Antony even look like, seen from Blake's eyes?) and on whatever events are about to happen to Blake... Either way, so many possibilities!