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9/23/20, 4:50 AM
Some great "misinterpreted" wishes. Please continue.
9/23/20, 4:38 AM
Somebody needs to do a side story about Beau and Tracy after the ride!
Nutiper
9/23/20, 4:28 AM
Ooh, there's something intriguing about the baroqueness and insularity of Antony's narrative — like, he's almost an unreliable narrator in the way he filters the world through his specific perspective. I bet there are some details he's straining out with his filter, omitting them just because he doesn't find them relevant or worth his attention... and we'll never even know what was omitted. (For example, the party could literally be happening in the past at Warhol's Factory or at Studio 54, and Antony wouldn't really notice, or think it relevant to bring up in his narration, because he's seeing the progress of time + our cultural signposts in a very different way than we would...) This whole thing made me *so* curious what the next chapters would be like! I could see it going one way if it sticks to Antony's voice; this gradual enfolding of Blake into the world and perspective of Antony's voice... And I could see it going another way if it switches to Blake's POV for the next chapter, and gives us this brisk, flipped, contemporary perspective on Antony (what would Antony even look like, seen from Blake's eyes?) and on whatever events are about to happen to Blake... Either way, so many possibilities!
Nutiper
9/23/20, 3:50 AM
Muscle growth... huge leaking cocks... magic blowjob powers... Stuart literally feeling that cock grow and stretch down his throat as he's deep-throating it... And then, both of them obliviously justifying it to themselves, with lines like "There's nothing gay about having to breathe through your nose 'cos you're deep-throating your friend's twelve-inch cock".... *chef kiss*
Nutiper
9/23/20, 3:36 AM
Oh I always adore your worldbuilding. And it inevitably makes me want to read a Chapter 2, *just* to keep seeing more of the world, and the characters you've placed in it... and then a Chapter 3... and 4... and 5... haha! This is a *great* concept for a pandemic, though — and a really nice character dynamic, too. It was great sexy fun to watch it develop between the three of them. :)
9/23/20, 2:04 AM
Loved it!
9/23/20, 1:32 AM
A great twist on straight to gay transformations! Loved it!
Anonymous
9/23/20, 1:26 AM
The way you write makes the scene so incredibly passionate, almost as though you feel a bit intrusive reading about the deep connection they're sharing. One of the most beautifully written stories I've read in a while...quite a talent!
Anonymous
9/23/20, 12:55 AM
Yeahhhh... not for me. I too love Karmic justice. I would love to hear the story of how Rob PAID Karma back for what he did to Ryan.
Anonymous
9/22/20, 10:54 PM
excellent