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Anonymous
9/22/20, 10:54 PM
excellent
Lakritz24
9/22/20, 9:36 PM
Very very good ideer! Congrats to You. I think you have to go further. J.J.Z.
May 7, 2017
9/22/20, 9:23 PM
So awesome it deserves a sequel and much more!
Anonymous
9/22/20, 8:31 PM
Spectacular
9/22/20, 7:46 PM
Beautiful use of language. Can't wait for the entrancing to begin :)
9/22/20, 6:51 PM
will we see part 5?
bulgestrap
9/22/20, 6:40 PM
Oh thanks! I very much enjoyed writing this. I'm new so this is what I've got for now.
9/22/20, 5:50 PM
I echo Hypnoguy. Beautifully written.
9/22/20, 4:53 PM
woah! That escalated quickly! Nice fun read, although I kinda feel bad for Dan in the end Hahaha
Tight Stories
9/22/20, 2:56 PM
Fair point on the slang. I only used it to try and help make the scally (a chav or bad boy in the uk) seem more real. I'll work on making the next one more universal. Good shout annon