Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/22/20, 8:09 AM
i really liked this one! it was an interesting take on the VR experience and written in a flowing, original style. i really hope you enjoyed it and you keep writing! can i ask, do you have any other stories on other websites?
Anonymous
9/22/20, 8:01 AM
love this! please keep going!
May 4, 2020
Limbo
9/22/20, 7:57 AM
This triggered all of my buttons. Would be really happy f you really decided to make a sequel just to see how the story will go.
boi98229
9/22/20, 6:58 AM
Me too! Hypnosis, mind control, and submission are my biggest kinks. Being dominated with bondage, and materials like latex and leather as tools is a huge turn-on. My only problem with the story is that i tend to like a lot of realism in hypnosis and mind control techniques, and for me 10 minutes to achieve that level of control is too unbelievable. In any case the rest of the story is so hot, i can overlook that issue. Thanks for sharing!! Looking forward to reading more of this story or others you may decide to write along these lines.
9/22/20, 6:41 AM
to be fair, it all depends on what form the original story was written, i write mine in word, i have noticed when you copy and paste this site does not always retain the format. i would like to see how william turns out
9/22/20, 6:37 AM
Hey Extractor! Not sure if you remember me a few years ago, but I was a huge fan of Project Alpha and we talked emailed each other for a while. I'm very glad you're back and I hope we continue to see more of your work posted on this site! Your trademark edging stories are always such a delight and I'm happy to be reading your writing once more!
BearBoi
9/22/20, 6:05 AM
some goddamn hot mental shifting going on here. not enough total-sub-cub straight-to-gay stuff around. and i always love accent changes.
9/22/20, 5:51 AM
Don't you think you should add a "humiliation" tag?
9/22/20, 2:07 AM
Hi, moderator! This is a joint story between me and author kuro. Can you make sure we're both listed as the author when it's published?
boi98229
9/22/20, 1:21 AM
i agree with all of the comments above, with the main thrust being, good start; keep going! Even though the hypnosis show has been used over and over, it is such a believable start, it is easy to see why it is used, and personally i enjoy it every time. So, the idea for the story so far is not at all original, but still a great start. i like your writing style. You've started a little character development, which for me is very important to create context and add to the spice for whatever action follows. For me, context, character personality, and even environmental context is important to domination/seduction/submission stories. The story may have chubbed me up a bit so far, but i have a way to go until i'm hard, and even farther to start wanking. Still I'm sitting up very straight in my chair, and my eyes are wide open with interest and anticipation of the next chapter. Please don't make me wait too long!