Recent Comments

Martin
9/22/20, 2:13 PM
Hi! You can change the author name yourself (it can be anything), the only thing I can do is add 'ownership' to kuro, so that it's listed under both your profiles and you can both see the stats.
9/22/20, 12:56 PM
Very hot story with a creative concept. Beautifully written!
9/22/20, 12:41 PM
YES! I'm all here for kinkier Nate
9/22/20, 11:58 AM
will we see a part 2 enevtually?
Anonymous
9/22/20, 10:15 AM
I liked the story a lot but I'm not from the United Kingdom so not too sure what some of the words mean like scully or the part with the accents
9/22/20, 10:06 AM
wow seriously, this is getting better, i really like how the pace of the story you're making. it's good. but i hope for bob to feel feminine and motherly towards dan and his boys without him realizing it. good work man, i really enjoy your story so far
Anonymous
9/22/20, 8:09 AM
i really liked this one! it was an interesting take on the VR experience and written in a flowing, original style. i really hope you enjoyed it and you keep writing! can i ask, do you have any other stories on other websites?
Anonymous
9/22/20, 8:01 AM
love this! please keep going!
May 4, 2020
Limbo
9/22/20, 7:57 AM
This triggered all of my buttons. Would be really happy f you really decided to make a sequel just to see how the story will go.
boi98229
9/22/20, 6:58 AM
Me too! Hypnosis, mind control, and submission are my biggest kinks. Being dominated with bondage, and materials like latex and leather as tools is a huge turn-on. My only problem with the story is that i tend to like a lot of realism in hypnosis and mind control techniques, and for me 10 minutes to achieve that level of control is too unbelievable. In any case the rest of the story is so hot, i can overlook that issue. Thanks for sharing!! Looking forward to reading more of this story or others you may decide to write along these lines.