Recent Comments

9/22/20, 5:51 AM
Don't you think you should add a "humiliation" tag?
9/22/20, 2:07 AM
Hi, moderator! This is a joint story between me and author kuro. Can you make sure we're both listed as the author when it's published?
boi98229
9/22/20, 1:21 AM
i agree with all of the comments above, with the main thrust being, good start; keep going! Even though the hypnosis show has been used over and over, it is such a believable start, it is easy to see why it is used, and personally i enjoy it every time. So, the idea for the story so far is not at all original, but still a great start. i like your writing style. You've started a little character development, which for me is very important to create context and add to the spice for whatever action follows. For me, context, character personality, and even environmental context is important to domination/seduction/submission stories. The story may have chubbed me up a bit so far, but i have a way to go until i'm hard, and even farther to start wanking. Still I'm sitting up very straight in my chair, and my eyes are wide open with interest and anticipation of the next chapter. Please don't make me wait too long!
9/21/20, 11:20 PM
I hope Cory will have enough strength to forgive his family. I know I wouldn't, but then again, I don't have people like Ronan or Wren in my life. I'm happy to see that you're continuing this story. I can't wait to see what you bring us!
9/21/20, 11:00 PM
Thanks very much for this updating side story was wonderful and thanks very much to shown how the system works on resisting subjects was very nice to read hope got to see your new chapter soon thanks very much and take care :D
9/21/20, 9:48 PM
Would love to see your take on a Black to White Racial TF one day.
Martin
9/21/20, 9:18 PM
Yes, thank you! Please don't make us wait for your next installment for so long! I'm nowhere as disciplined as a T-Drone!
Lakritz24
9/21/20, 8:34 PM
Hallo, das liest sich als Schleife, wie in DUNE oder Darth Vader, jedoch auch wie im richtigen Auf-richtigen Leben. Opa, Vater, Son und Opa, Vater Son. Hübsch, ein Teufelkreis! Doch Kreis? Was ist die Kreiszahl nochmal: "irrational und unendlich". Geht also nur nach unten, kleiner oder nach oben; größer. Entscheidung!!! J.J.Z.
Anonymous
9/21/20, 6:19 PM
Great story! For ideas, maybe Jay ends up being an Omega foot slave. :)
Anonymous
9/21/20, 6:15 PM
I was saying that Jim inevitable DOES resign himself to being a slut at the end of that last chapter,maybe he's starting to like it.?. maybe just go with with the flow.? Theres nothing UNHAPPY about an ending if Jim remains subject to others sexual whims,if he gives in. What u have written so far is certainly my kink. Wherever u take Jim,i'll love it anyhow