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Anonymous
9/21/20, 12:26 PM
Love the direction that the story is taking, so can’t wait to see where it’s going to go next! That said, this part feels like it could have benefitted from some more editing, especially in the second half. There are places where punctuation starts to drift off and things needed a second take to make sense. With a little more honing in that area this could go from a good story to a great one!
9/21/20, 12:25 PM
I enjoyed chapter 2..looking forward to Collin being in love with Ian and turn against Jay. Would be fun to get Collin to flex in front of Ian just to annoy Jay.. My only negative in the chapters is the guys talking about alphas and betas.. I don't think in the 'real world' you would say it out loud as doesn't feel natural, and as someone else said some tightening up with editing and punctuation. People like this series so I imagine they would be happy to help with editing if you asked. Good work!
9/21/20, 12:05 PM
super hot! I love it!
9/21/20, 11:24 AM
Awesome chapter! I found the projector scene to be very hot. Take your time, and keep up the great work!
9/21/20, 10:54 AM
> I wonder if that will lead to an inter-pollinated conflict down the road. > Hmmm......
9/21/20, 1:32 AM
Whew, I love coming back and re-reading this story. I love your cock shrinking stories, please keep writing them! This was an all-around fun read, with all sorts of silly and hot TFs. Thoroughly enjoyed.
9/21/20, 1:28 AM
loved the ending!!! thank you for the happy ending omg I was so invested in this whole saga I'd literally punch the air and cry if Kevin and Jacob didn't get a happy ending. Thank you so much!
9/21/20, 12:56 AM
awesome!
9/20/20, 11:53 PM
The fact that Sheriff Lane is able to resist the siren call of the great symbiont only makes him hotter to me! He's so powerful on his own. I wonder if that will lead to an inter-pollinated conflict down the road.
9/20/20, 11:50 PM
This is an awesome story. One of the better ones I've read on here as of late! Really enjoying the slowburn style. So many stories just BOOM change everything immediately. It's fun to see the slow and subtle changes happening to the guys and how it's affecting them, their bodies and their personalities. It's fun to see Harry becoming bigger and more dominant and Tommy becoming more submisssive even though he tries to fight it. I certainly wished that Tommy had measured Harry's meat as well! I bet they would be in for a surprise.