Recent Comments

9/20/20, 10:23 PM
every chapter is better than the last!
9/20/20, 10:05 PM
great! but too short lol.
Lusty Stallion
9/20/20, 9:50 PM
Thanks man. I was toying with the idea of writing a sex scene for Brad and the Arabian but felt Jim was waiting & thought id save it for the next chapter. Thanks for the love for the story. I promise you sex in the next chapter
9/20/20, 8:48 PM
This story keeps getting better and better! Love how they still manage to keep their playful bromance shit through the changes. That's relationship goals there haha
9/20/20, 7:37 PM
thanks for all the comments xx. next chapter is uploaded sorry editor haha bad timing.
9/20/20, 5:57 PM
I'm not sure I understand the feedback. Are you saying Jim shouldn't have resigned himself to being a slut as easily? I'm grateful for feedback, I'm just really not sure what you're trying to say 😅
9/20/20, 5:23 PM
Really hot, tho I wish I'd waited until it was finished so i could've read it all at once. Lot's of built up tension!!
Anonymous
9/20/20, 5:18 PM
Aw come on,push the boat out every once in a while. At the end of this Jim seems to inevitably give to his lust as a bottom slut. Lets sail down those choppy waters for a while longer. If the author chooses to reach the fork in the river and take the boat down the calmer waters of Happy Ending Creek,then cool, i won't rock the boat. But if he chooses to go down bottom slut rapids,i'll hold on as tight as i can for the ride. Its just fantasy after all.
9/20/20, 5:08 PM
it is a very hot story. hope there will be more.
9/20/20, 4:47 PM
Thanks a lot for your comments, as I said before if you're taking your time to leave a comment on here the least I can do it's to keep writing this story 'till the end. @BossyRay. I love writing Bob's struggle. It's kind of hot pushing this bigot with deep rooted toxic masculinity to be sluttier, even when it's against his own beliefs. @Erratic101. When Michael is introduced into the story we will see how the dynamics in the family have changed. Without saying much, isn't Bob the only beta of the family at this point? @BobbyBlobfish. About the kisses, do you think Dan will be direct and program Bob to lust for his mouth? or will he take the long road and change Bob's mind to let his homophobic views aside? @Anon #1. Yes!, it's very inspired on the mental gymnastics some men do to avoid being "gay". And I totally love your suggestion. :) @Heru Kane. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I want to believe that we will have plenty of time to explore more of Dan's POV having fun with Bob ;). The kiss and Bob's views on homosexuality are part of the same arch I want to explore in the following chapters, so let's see how that unfolds.