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9/20/20, 5:23 PM
Really hot, tho I wish I'd waited until it was finished so i could've read it all at once. Lot's of built up tension!!
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9/20/20, 5:18 PM
Aw come on,push the boat out every once in a while. At the end of this Jim seems to inevitably give to his lust as a bottom slut. Lets sail down those choppy waters for a while longer. If the author chooses to reach the fork in the river and take the boat down the calmer waters of Happy Ending Creek,then cool, i won't rock the boat. But if he chooses to go down bottom slut rapids,i'll hold on as tight as i can for the ride. Its just fantasy after all.
9/20/20, 5:08 PM
it is a very hot story. hope there will be more.
9/20/20, 4:47 PM
Thanks a lot for your comments, as I said before if you're taking your time to leave a comment on here the least I can do it's to keep writing this story 'till the end. @BossyRay. I love writing Bob's struggle. It's kind of hot pushing this bigot with deep rooted toxic masculinity to be sluttier, even when it's against his own beliefs. @Erratic101. When Michael is introduced into the story we will see how the dynamics in the family have changed. Without saying much, isn't Bob the only beta of the family at this point? @BobbyBlobfish. About the kisses, do you think Dan will be direct and program Bob to lust for his mouth? or will he take the long road and change Bob's mind to let his homophobic views aside? @Anon #1. Yes!, it's very inspired on the mental gymnastics some men do to avoid being "gay". And I totally love your suggestion. :) @Heru Kane. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I want to believe that we will have plenty of time to explore more of Dan's POV having fun with Bob ;). The kiss and Bob's views on homosexuality are part of the same arch I want to explore in the following chapters, so let's see how that unfolds.
9/20/20, 4:40 PM
Thank you for continuing the series, as this has become one of my favorites.
9/20/20, 4:29 PM
Thanks so so much fort this new chapter ! It was a great serie and now it becomes even better with Lt. Mustang as a perfect Jock Pilot Cum Slave under full control ! Can't wait to see what will happen in 1800 hours !
9/20/20, 3:35 PM
The whole thing with Bob and kissing is kind of brilliant. Like 'its not gay to suck cock or get fucked but if I kiss a man that's a gay thing." So yeah, I like that mental hangup. Its nifty. I like the events of this chapter. Though, and not to be a broken record, I did wish the pov on the rimming was Dan and not Bob, I like seeing the rimming get done rather than read how it feels to have it done and so that pov was a bit off for me. That said, I did like how he has come to be such a slut, so that was great. I like the idea presented above of Dan taking them all but not revealing to each said control for a bit. That sort of secret control is kind of hot till the massive party reveal where he fucks them all as they lay on their backs staring in bliss at their alpha and each other knowing a new state of things is begining. As for suggestions I think something about how Dan has the right to dominate and control others would be great. That it is his right as a supreme alpha to take over anyone he wants to take over. Beyond that something to maybe get over the whole hatred of gay things, or maybe some command to have him stop using fag or something. This was fun and good and enjoyable. Thanks for writing it!
9/20/20, 3:31 PM
One of those bad ending stories that makes my heart ache and my cock throb at the same time. Hopefully we get an eventual good ending! But if not, well... still hot as hell.
9/20/20, 3:26 PM
honestly though bless patrick <3
9/20/20, 3:25 PM
This is so fucking hot. I'd like to see the Extractor enslave more soldiers from both perspectives. Great work!