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9/20/20, 4:40 PM
Thank you for continuing the series, as this has become one of my favorites.
9/20/20, 4:29 PM
Thanks so so much fort this new chapter ! It was a great serie and now it becomes even better with Lt. Mustang as a perfect Jock Pilot Cum Slave under full control ! Can't wait to see what will happen in 1800 hours !
9/20/20, 3:35 PM
The whole thing with Bob and kissing is kind of brilliant. Like 'its not gay to suck cock or get fucked but if I kiss a man that's a gay thing." So yeah, I like that mental hangup. Its nifty. I like the events of this chapter. Though, and not to be a broken record, I did wish the pov on the rimming was Dan and not Bob, I like seeing the rimming get done rather than read how it feels to have it done and so that pov was a bit off for me. That said, I did like how he has come to be such a slut, so that was great. I like the idea presented above of Dan taking them all but not revealing to each said control for a bit. That sort of secret control is kind of hot till the massive party reveal where he fucks them all as they lay on their backs staring in bliss at their alpha and each other knowing a new state of things is begining. As for suggestions I think something about how Dan has the right to dominate and control others would be great. That it is his right as a supreme alpha to take over anyone he wants to take over. Beyond that something to maybe get over the whole hatred of gay things, or maybe some command to have him stop using fag or something. This was fun and good and enjoyable. Thanks for writing it!
9/20/20, 3:31 PM
One of those bad ending stories that makes my heart ache and my cock throb at the same time. Hopefully we get an eventual good ending! But if not, well... still hot as hell.
9/20/20, 3:26 PM
honestly though bless patrick <3
9/20/20, 3:25 PM
This is so fucking hot. I'd like to see the Extractor enslave more soldiers from both perspectives. Great work!
9/20/20, 3:10 PM
this is so weirdly sweet and romantic, i almost forgot it's magic not just love
9/20/20, 3:07 PM
I think Dan will probably enslave all of them and keep it a secret from each other until the big final reveal
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9/20/20, 2:41 PM
Great story so far, loving Bob's internal conflict. Obviously Dan will need control of the boys, and perhaps that's where he can further corrupt Dan? He's struggling with his former "alpha-ness" and perhaps this leaves an opportunity for him to gain some of that back, as an alpha-slave. Dan is the house alpha, so he should have control of the boys too, but someone will need to be a second in command, his lieutenant so to speak. In the meantime... Dan's not gay, gay men are attracted to other men. Dan's a beta, or slave, he only wants to submit to his alpha, and his alpha can do anything he wants to his beta slave, including kiss him.
9/20/20, 2:27 PM
Awesome new chapter. I liked the scene at the end with the peacock. The scene in the beginning would have been even hotter if we got to experience sex with the new hot Arabian guy. The narrator having sex with him would have been really hot.