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9/20/20, 3:25 PM
This is so fucking hot. I'd like to see the Extractor enslave more soldiers from both perspectives. Great work!
9/20/20, 3:10 PM
this is so weirdly sweet and romantic, i almost forgot it's magic not just love
9/20/20, 3:07 PM
I think Dan will probably enslave all of them and keep it a secret from each other until the big final reveal
Anonymous
9/20/20, 2:41 PM
Great story so far, loving Bob's internal conflict. Obviously Dan will need control of the boys, and perhaps that's where he can further corrupt Dan? He's struggling with his former "alpha-ness" and perhaps this leaves an opportunity for him to gain some of that back, as an alpha-slave. Dan is the house alpha, so he should have control of the boys too, but someone will need to be a second in command, his lieutenant so to speak. In the meantime... Dan's not gay, gay men are attracted to other men. Dan's a beta, or slave, he only wants to submit to his alpha, and his alpha can do anything he wants to his beta slave, including kiss him.
9/20/20, 2:27 PM
Awesome new chapter. I liked the scene at the end with the peacock. The scene in the beginning would have been even hotter if we got to experience sex with the new hot Arabian guy. The narrator having sex with him would have been really hot.
Anonymous
9/20/20, 2:00 PM
Echoing others, you captured the obliviousness beautifully. Looking forward to more of your work!
9/20/20, 1:52 PM
THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH FOR THIS SPECIAL GIFT! AND I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY!! (*≧▽≦)ノシ))
Anonymous
9/20/20, 1:20 PM
Also, looking forward to see how exactly Dan helps Bob sleep easier ;) We'll see what Dan convinces Bob needs for a good night's sleep
Anonymous
9/20/20, 1:00 PM
I eagerly look forward to see how much fun Dan has with Bob regarding the third (shower together) and fifth (daily blowjobs) new rules. It was also very hot reading Bob's internal dialogue as he internally caved in to his hunger for Dan's dick and overall having his hopes used by him. The mental barrier regarding kissing reminds me of one closet case in my personal life. Ah, men... Looking forward to the next chapter! I think my only suggestion/request(?) is Bob sneaking in at some point in the night or early morning to give Dan a blowjob and swallow his cum since he's such a beta for him (and he knows he loves it).
Anonymous
9/20/20, 1:00 PM
Nice one - Daddy, seduction, nipples and brown bottle.... more please!