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9/20/20, 3:07 PM
I think Dan will probably enslave all of them and keep it a secret from each other until the big final reveal
Anonymous
9/20/20, 2:41 PM
Great story so far, loving Bob's internal conflict. Obviously Dan will need control of the boys, and perhaps that's where he can further corrupt Dan? He's struggling with his former "alpha-ness" and perhaps this leaves an opportunity for him to gain some of that back, as an alpha-slave. Dan is the house alpha, so he should have control of the boys too, but someone will need to be a second in command, his lieutenant so to speak. In the meantime... Dan's not gay, gay men are attracted to other men. Dan's a beta, or slave, he only wants to submit to his alpha, and his alpha can do anything he wants to his beta slave, including kiss him.
9/20/20, 2:27 PM
Awesome new chapter. I liked the scene at the end with the peacock. The scene in the beginning would have been even hotter if we got to experience sex with the new hot Arabian guy. The narrator having sex with him would have been really hot.
Anonymous
9/20/20, 2:00 PM
Echoing others, you captured the obliviousness beautifully. Looking forward to more of your work!
9/20/20, 1:52 PM
THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH FOR THIS SPECIAL GIFT! AND I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY!! (*≧▽≦)ノシ))
Anonymous
9/20/20, 1:20 PM
Also, looking forward to see how exactly Dan helps Bob sleep easier ;) We'll see what Dan convinces Bob needs for a good night's sleep
Anonymous
9/20/20, 1:00 PM
I eagerly look forward to see how much fun Dan has with Bob regarding the third (shower together) and fifth (daily blowjobs) new rules. It was also very hot reading Bob's internal dialogue as he internally caved in to his hunger for Dan's dick and overall having his hopes used by him. The mental barrier regarding kissing reminds me of one closet case in my personal life. Ah, men... Looking forward to the next chapter! I think my only suggestion/request(?) is Bob sneaking in at some point in the night or early morning to give Dan a blowjob and swallow his cum since he's such a beta for him (and he knows he loves it).
Anonymous
9/20/20, 1:00 PM
Nice one - Daddy, seduction, nipples and brown bottle.... more please!
9/20/20, 11:59 AM
So for the suggestions, I think something about the kisses, something about how to deal with Michael and makes him see the video, and perhaps the suggestion to look at Dan's video. We are quite a lot who commented that would help a lot. Very interesting evolution for Bob! But it hasn't finished yet so I'm waiting to see where it goes before doing a judgment. Well those new rules are announcing fun in perspective...
9/20/20, 11:58 AM
> What’s with the transfer of knowledge through the finger? We know of no such power in human, symbiont or fused. > Here's what we DO know: when a symbiont and a human have "normal" sex and the symbiont cums in the human, it creates a bond between the two. With time and repetition, the bond strengthens and the symbiont is able to communicate commands telepathically to the human. Whether the human "hears" the words of the command or is just compelled to obey them isn't yet clear. We've seen this demonstrated in Book One between the Sheriff and his Deputy several times and we'll see some further evidence of it between Snake and Rugby Boy in upcoming chapters. We are just now discovering the depth to which this connection exists. The "implanting of knowledge/future orders" is an extension of this ability -- at least, to my thinking. As for the finger-thing, guess which (often-high) author saw *E.T. the Extra-Terrestrial* that weekend? ("I'll be right here.") Have faith, Pup, it'll pay off in Chapter 14. > And a promise broken. Was I not promised a Scenter scene? > Perhaps you should read section 44 again. If that was too subtle, maybe you'll like Vinnie's power demonstration in Chapter 13 better?