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9/20/20, 3:04 AM
Nice, keep the feet, love it <3
9/20/20, 2:16 AM
Wow, this was really hot! I loved how you wrote Jim's obliviousness! Stories like this where there the target is completely oblivious to the mind control are so good when they're written this well!
9/20/20, 1:58 AM
I'd be lying if I said I didn't cry multiple times. I sincerely hope you continue this story, I think a lot of people need to read it. There is a lot of love in your heart for you to be able to write this. Thank you so much for sharing this. At first I thought it was insane how you pumped out so many chapters and it was a little intimidating, but once I started reading, it was hard to stop. Honestly, I think we all wish we could be whisked away by an angel to a place filled with as much love as Avalon. I cannot wait until your next story, whether it's another chapter of this amazing series, or a completely new story, I know it will be amazing and full of love!
9/20/20, 12:35 AM
Not to rain on the parade after such good comments, but the clouds are heavy and the pressure is low. What's with the transfer of knowledge through the finger? We know of no such power in human, symbiont or fused. Explique s'il vous plait. And a promise broken. Qu'est ce que le fuck? Was I not promised a Scenter scene? Or am I being a rudely impatient pup who needs a slap on the nose and told to sit and wait.
Anonymous
9/19/20, 11:15 PM
bro can't wait for an update!!
revenge
9/19/20, 11:07 PM
my favorite part gotta be the innuendos btw. its amazing to know what harry thinks without him telling directly to tom. so f hot
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/19/20, 11:04 PM
I wish somebody would control me like that. Bet it feels superb.
revenge
9/19/20, 11:04 PM
god, this felt too short. the buildup is killing me and i love it. cant wait to read more!
marc
9/19/20, 11:03 PM
awesome...keep it up
NZDom
9/19/20, 11:03 PM
Can't believe I've never read your stuff before ! All your writing is so hot !! love how you play on the obliviousness of the subjects. Looking forward to seeing more from you soon :Q