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Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/19/20, 11:04 PM
I wish somebody would control me like that. Bet it feels superb.
revenge
9/19/20, 11:04 PM
god, this felt too short. the buildup is killing me and i love it. cant wait to read more!
marc
9/19/20, 11:03 PM
awesome...keep it up
NZDom
9/19/20, 11:03 PM
Can't believe I've never read your stuff before ! All your writing is so hot !! love how you play on the obliviousness of the subjects. Looking forward to seeing more from you soon :Q
editor
9/19/20, 9:33 PM
Great story, please keep writing. Also...if you need an editor ask me to email you. I can help with spelling and such.
Goku
9/19/20, 8:38 PM
So I finally finished this story after five reads, I kept cuming while reading so I had to start again, & again till I could finish it, bit it's super hot though, loved it, & thanks for the good read!
9/19/20, 8:10 PM
loved everything about this story - great to see you back. keep up the weird!! I'm sure each one of those fresh bombs has a story to tell...maybe their effects are slightly tweaked based on what their 'parents' are like?
9/19/20, 7:31 PM
This is great! I loved the cock shrinking the first time around, so emphasizing the size difference with Kent was perfect. Would love to see more!
Anonymous
9/19/20, 6:53 PM
I love camping story.
9/19/20, 6:20 PM
> Loving the feel of the Sheriff and his deputy > The Sheriff's Deputy snuck onto the scene because I liked the idea of the Sheriff having a human "familiar" -- a concept I borrowed from vampire lore -- and he developed quickly into an important addition to the Sheriff's "supporting cast". I think they have the healthiest dom/sub relationship I've ever written -- I'll be exploring that a little more closely in upcoming chapters -- and I'll be testing some boundaries. This morning I went on a bike ride with a friend of mine and he reminded me that the Sheriff's Deputy is his favorite character (precisely BECAUSE he's a "familiar"). I assured him -- as I assure all of you reading now -- that I, too, love the Sheriff's Deputy and what I have in mind for him will completely justify his inclusion in this story. (Even if he began as a throw-away character.) All will become clear in Chapter 14. > And Vance, and the idea of him, are so hot! > The idea for the three Variants: Vance, Vinnie, and Vernon, (or the concept of them, at least) came while I was writing [PLAYING WITH Absman420's TOYS: A "Pollination" Tale](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/608546) when I realized half the fun of botany was creating grafts and cuts and combinations of plants that never existed. It was a short step from there to someone genetically altering the alien plants to enhance particular qualities of the variant Host. I didn't use that concept then in that story, but it stayed in my mind until this, when I gave the skills to Mr. Mac. You'll meet Vinnie next and see him in action in Chapter 13. > Looking forward to the next entry. > Next chapter features the return of another fan favorite: Staff-Sergeant Wendt!