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9/19/20, 4:23 PM
I'm so glade to see a new chapter to this story. These two are just the sweetest must cutest couple I have ever read/seen. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
9/19/20, 4:11 PM
Another great chapter. Loving the feel of the Sheriff and his deputy. And Vance, and the idea of him, are so hot! Looking forward to the next entry.
Anonymous
9/19/20, 3:36 PM
i live to serve the virus
9/19/20, 2:37 PM
I hope to see more of the bomb later
9/19/20, 10:58 AM
*je ne parle pas français* There. I've said it. I don't speak French. Many years ago, I was in Montreal on a job and I was worried that I wouldn't be able to talk to anyone. Of course, the group I was working with were all bilingual and more than happy to teach me some French. I learned: 1. I do not speak French 2. Can you tell me where the washroom is? 3. Forgive my manners, I'm an American. 4. Do you want fries with that? This chapter convinced me that Rugby Boy should only speak French and it could be kind of fun. Thank you, Google Translate. WHICH MEANS my French might sometimes be wrong, sorry. I have learned the French word for "penis" tho. Who says you get too old to learn...?
9/19/20, 9:51 AM
I've loved your writing for a long long time and I really loved this story. I can't tell you how many stories of yours I've read and re-read. I loved that you featured a non-white character as the object of desire/hypnosis too here without it being wholly left to the reader's imagination. That's something that I always look out for. And, strange enough to say because it maybe seems incidental, I really liked the setting. It made for something a little different and I enjoyed the activities it prompted - rough-housing, hiking, bathing. It drew from a different pool of images and aesthetics than you often get in frat initiation type settings. The contrast between the laid-back and stoic kind of attitude that Buck had compared to the asshole he was when he was checking in on the phone was cool too. It gave him some extra dimension.
9/19/20, 9:39 AM
Ever since I found this story on Nifty way back when I thought it was incredibly hot. It's a shame there isn't more writing by the same author.
Lusty Stallion
9/19/20, 8:49 AM
Wow. i did not see that one coming. so hot and different and steamy and...well wow.
9/19/20, 7:41 AM
A really great first story. You've got talent.
9/19/20, 7:08 AM
> It does make me wonder though, if Dave bit someone else, would Nate have control of them by proxy or would only Dave be able to command them? > I imagine that the sired werewolf would become loyal and obedient towards their alpha (Dave) and no-one else, unless stated otherwise by the alpha. If Nate wanted to have some control over them, he could order Dave to command something or ask his puppy boy to make the sired wolves treat him like an alpha too. (Summarizing, Nate wouldn't be so much in control of the situation unless Dave was around/he requested a 'rank up' of sorts). Hopefully I'll get to explore that idea sometime, or in another story featuring a werewolf, who knows!