Recent Comments

Elm
9/19/20, 3:51 AM
I would love to see what happens when you take others people heads off!
9/19/20, 3:26 AM
I do like that you're giving us a bit more detail about the office, but remember the old "Show, don't tell" rule. Just having the Boss tell us that the office is full of naked, brainwashed drones is a lot less fun that allowing us to see that for ourselves.
9/19/20, 2:09 AM
this story reminds me of "Gettin the farmers!" by NachoHypno and these 2 are my favorites
Orpheus
9/19/20, 1:50 AM
Oops! 😅 I'll fix that! But thank you for the kind words!
9/19/20, 1:29 AM
@PupScout yeah, reading back i realized it was pretty sparse on the details of the other workers. I'm not sure theres going to be too much more info on them going forward, but I WILL say that Michael is destined for something that fits his current skill-set a little better than a corporate worker drone. I hope you enjoy what's coming up.
9/19/20, 1:28 AM
If you mean Nate's not going to become a werewolf then I'm fine with that as I really like the power fantasy of a weaker human having control of of a big strong werewolf. I admit my bias. It does make me wonder though, if Dave bit someone else, would Nate have control of them by proxy or would only Dave be able to command them? I do hope we meet more werewolves as the series goes on. Look forward to the next chapter.
9/19/20, 1:08 AM
Hearing comments like yours encourages me to write more. Thank you for that.
9/18/20, 11:52 PM
Last chapter someone left a comment wishing there was detail about the office. I agreed but wanted to see where you went. The beginning of this chapter when Michael is coming in filthy and telling of his daily routine, I thought, "this story better start giving some details of the office or have a good reason as to why not." And then it came. Good job. Now I hope to see how well Michael assimulates to becoming a drone and what his real job is.
9/18/20, 11:50 PM
> love the story, bro. can you finish like a good scout. I liked that story > Uhm, there is a second chapter but I'm really not proud of the quality. Besides that, I haven't written any more of that story because I left my scout group and lost all inspiration for it. I really don't feel like publishing that chapter here, but I may rewrite it with better quality in the future (Don't hold your breath for it though, since I'm not really inspired to do that). So... yeah, I'm very sorry. Also, thanks everyone for the nice words! So glad to see people enjoying the story!
EthanEye
9/18/20, 11:36 PM
love the story, bro. can you finish like a good scout. I liked that story