Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/6/25, 7:33 PM
Great story! Can't wait for more!
7/6/25, 6:40 PM
I've been enjoying your story, however, if I were to name one criticism it would be the overt religiosity in this chapter. Maybe other readers have a different take on it, but that is a turn-off for me. That's just my feelings on it and is not meant to detract from your otherwise excellent and creative story.
7/6/25, 6:05 PM
As you know already...I'm VERY eager for the next chapter. Used re-reading all this to help get me in the mood to write today. You're crazy talented, my friend.
Zander
7/6/25, 4:57 PM
Thank you for the wonderful story and universe. It's a pity that chapters don't come out often.😢
tim
7/6/25, 2:24 PM
a hot amazing opening set up… as the story unfolded it just kept getting hotter and hotter all the way through!!!
7/6/25, 1:39 PM
Really loved this series. Hope someday to see it continued. :blue_heart:
7/6/25, 12:48 PM
Thank you very much for your comment! And thanks to Master for inspiring and encouraging His slave!
7/6/25, 11:10 AM
Worldbuilding and eroticism combined - a very wonderful combo. I really enjoyed the read; the horny side of me wished to have experienced the transformations from the recipient's perspective, or heard them talk about how good it feels, as a third person view is a bit more clinical. Still, I appreciated the craftsmanship from you as author and Arnalf as an artist. Thanks for sharing your art!
7/6/25, 10:25 AM
Aside from everything else, I have to say I rather love the use of footnotes!
7/6/25, 9:44 AM
Hot!