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Anonymous
1/11/25, 4:28 AM
I cannot wait for part 3...
Anonymous
1/9/25, 3:13 AM
Poor Rocky. I really hope Colt can save him somehow. I'm really loving the direction this story is taking. The last part will be the last, right? I can't believe this story is already coming to an end. I really wanted to see more interactions between Black Eagle and Colt. It is very interesting to see that the feelings that Rocky feels for Colt are so strong that, in a way, they escape into this new personality created by the villain, even making Black Eagle ask if there was a possibility of the villain enslaving Colt just so he could have him around, and allowing the real Rocky to continue to exist. I kind of have a thing for corrupted heroes manipulating and trying to corrupt their partners/love interests so they can both be together on the dark side of the force 😅 And this revelation that it was Black Eagle's Master who was responsible for the death of Colt's parents. This took me completely by surprise. This will only make the final confrontation even more exciting. It also makes me wonder if there is any further connection between the villain and Colt. This reminds me of the first chapter, where the villain sent Iron Claw to capture Colt. At that moment I thought it was a move just to impact Rocky, kidnap Colt and use him as bait to lure Rocky, but now I'm wondering if there was some ulterior motive.

Anonymous
1/9/25, 4:01 AM
@Anonymous "The last part will be the last, right?" The translator really made this part confusing. What I wanted to ask is whether the next chapter will be the last.

1/9/25, 4:35 AM
@Anonymous It depends on how long it gets lol. I had to cut about four sections from this one and put it in the next so it might be four.

Anonymous
1/9/25, 4:39 PM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) I don't mind very long stories. In fact, I kind of like it, because you can develop and work on the characters and the world down to the smallest details. The only real problem is going on too long unnecessarily, because this can end up making the story lose its direction, making it boring and even tiring to follow, or simply repetitive. I saw another comment where you said that you decided to write this story inspired by another story whose ending disappointed you. If there is no problem for you, could you tell me what the title is and where I can find it? I really like these Superheroes being corrupted stories, but I'm pretty new here so I haven't read many yet and would love recommendations.

1/9/25, 5:03 PM
@Anonymous It was called “the training of duty boy.”

1/10/25, 1:02 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) The training of a duty boy represents an innovative approach to mind control. However, the text is lengthy and can be challenging to read.

1/10/25, 1:06 AM
@[Ozzy](/user/show/10048159) Agreed. But I liked Henry and felt really bad for how his world was literally destroyed and all he got for winning was still being controlled by his boyfriend and his dad still wanting to be controlled. lol. Just made me want to do Something else.

John
1/10/25, 3:53 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) There is a second part of that series. I tried my best to read it, but there are a lot of characters, and I don’t really “vibe” with the mind control methods there. Maybe it’s not for me as the approach is very intense… I just like a simple, sleeper agent story like yours, with a happy ending 😉

1/10/25, 2:19 PM
@John There are some pretty hot parts to that story but I feel like I’m too dumb to understand most of it!

John
1/10/25, 2:44 PM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) It was way, way too complicated for me 🥹 But all the hypnosis parts are quite good. Sadly, that part only takes around 20-30% of the story…

Anonymous
1/10/25, 3:50 PM
@John I just finished reading a few chapters of this story. I liked the first few chapters, the hypnosis and manipulation, but after a while I noticed the same thing you guys said, the story getting a bit too complex, requiring a more careful reading to not get lost in the events. There are really a lot of good points and I really liked the main characters and the relationship between them, and I want to know how this story ends, but I'm definitely going to take a break and reread a few chapters a little more calmly before moving on.
1/11/25, 2:39 AM
Love the stories GH- 92956 GPSH- 654
HypnoMutt
1/11/25, 12:49 AM
What a ride! that last scene, and last sentence, is flawless.
Jan 9, 2025
1/10/25, 10:38 PM
Soooo incredibly hot, loved his cock being so small he couldn't even get it out of his foreskin 🤤, hope he had to do a meet and greet after too

1/10/25, 10:56 PM
@[DannyStorm](/user/show/10002076) With that cute little nubbin, I don't think the fans would be shaking his hands. A whole new meaning to the term "grip and grin"
1/10/25, 10:50 PM
This is really really hot! I love watching Travis's mind break during the latter half of this chapter, and I'm excited for Jon to spend some time figuring out exactly what combination of magic and suppressed submissiveness is bringing him to this point :P
1/10/25, 10:21 PM
Excellent. He's gonna sink further and further into submissive depravity until he's BEGGING Jon to claim his as property. Ball gags, blindfolds, and leather crops are in his future. Can't wait for more
Sub4Dominic
1/10/25, 10:13 PM
Great story. I think Dylan needed to embrace his submissive side and chastity belt. The changes all started, and he's shocked at what he did to himself. Submission to his new Master is important. I love where the story is going and seeing Dylan be unable to resist the physical changes is a great way to show off his mental capture.
Anonymous
1/10/25, 9:54 PM
Diversity win! The robot who used to be a homophobic dickhead jock uses he/it! In all seriousness I loved this story!! I’m happy for the two, actually, and I’m glad [NAME PENDING] is happy too