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9/16/20, 10:10 PM
Always great stuff Mr Bracken.
Lusty Stallion
9/16/20, 9:38 PM
Man, I really enjoyed seeing what would happen. Keep up the good work, and its great seeing your writing developing to. Keep experimenting. we're happy to be your gineapigs :)
Anonymous
9/16/20, 9:12 PM
I love this!
Elm
9/16/20, 9:10 PM
I like your stories! they are all a bit more wholesome than what we usually see here haha. I would love to see a bottom daddy tough haha, you always make them tops!
Anonymous
9/16/20, 9:02 PM
I live to serve the virus
Anonymous
9/16/20, 8:47 PM
i live to serve the virus
Anonymous
9/16/20, 8:44 PM
This was so hot! I can't wait for the next one!
9/16/20, 8:15 PM
A great story! I like that there old self wasn't wiped away but that they had to choose to embrace their new life. I hope this series continues! Amazing slow burn writing. The gradual mental transformation is super!
9/16/20, 8:07 PM
Please continue this series! I love it!
9/16/20, 6:46 PM
Thanks for your comments. @Erratic101, I'm glad you like that. Most of the comments wanted him to keep being an Alpha but him being a beta it's for the better. What other suggestions would you like to see in Bob? @Haru Kane, I like your ideas. Having a big burly man pleasuring you as you watch tv sounds great. About the blackmail, as I said before, I have a pretty good idea of where I'm going with the characters but everything could change on the way. The blackmail wasn't part of the original plan. In a way, it was used to push Bob to submission. Also, I don't think Dan had the intention to use that information, Michael and Dell still see Dan as a beta so I won't think they'll be happy with him messing with his father. @ForgottenCradle. and @Biasinoj, At this point of the story, Bob's (and Dan's) secret it's a wildcard. The smartest plan it's to keep it like it is, but sometimes the safest choice isn't the most fun.