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9/16/20, 6:03 PM
i would love to see the entire dorm fall, particularly with more time spent with our sandman's instructions that he gives the jocks that took place off 'camera' this time around. or at least more time with the newly converted jockboys so we can see them start to enact their new programming.
9/16/20, 5:54 PM
this story is so hot ! i'm really looking forward to the chapter 3 !
Tmp1142
9/16/20, 5:48 PM
looking forward to the next few chapters!
Sep 16, 2020
Zac
9/16/20, 5:31 PM
Fu-KING HOT! I wanna plan a vacation...
9/16/20, 4:18 PM
If I were Dan I'd keep it a secret until Bob's sons are on the same page as their dad and have them reveal it to themselves
9/16/20, 4:04 PM
Love the slow transformation. Looking forward to what happens next.
9/16/20, 3:59 PM
I'd rather Dan still play with Bob. And yes he keeps the secret so he can blackmail Bob if he rebels a little
9/16/20, 3:41 PM
I love this slow burn. Cant wait for the next chapter
9/16/20, 3:39 PM
The beta thing is interesting though I have to be honest and say I am not entirely a fan of the blackmail. Though this is I think just a kneejerk reaction as it works in the story, lol. (Though I hope he doesn't have an intention of using it.) The rimming was nice, could have been longer (haha), but as is it was hot. Looking forward to seeing how he makes the sons into good boys as well. Having them be beta boys for him sounds fun. Also, maybe he will be motivated to exercise more - not so much so he becomes a muscle man himself but so he becomes more healthy. I also like the image of Dan sitting on the couch watching TV as Bob either is on his knees sucking his alpha's cock or he is laying on the couch so his face is pressed into crotch as hands rub his backside. But yeah, good story.
Sep 16, 2020
9/16/20, 2:09 PM
Thanks guys! This was supposed to be a story contest submission but apparently I'm a himbo and can't read prompts. So we'll see if some other inspiration strikes me for further notes in this vein!