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Aug 7, 2018
9/15/20, 10:02 PM
It's a great idea but I'd have loved it to be longer - it's over almost before it began! Either a slower transformation, or having Sean notice more of the changes, or actually transforming some of his frat bros would all have made this story better but it is a good start!
9/15/20, 10:00 PM
@Transformheaven - Thanks for reading!
9/15/20, 9:35 PM
A first-rate story! :D Super clever, well-written, and oh-so-hot. :)
rutu56
9/15/20, 8:47 PM
Well-written, very original, and absolutely hilarious!
9/15/20, 7:38 PM
That looks really promising! Already love it so far!
9/15/20, 6:54 PM
Thanks @NANOwriter! I've spent many years reading other people's stories. About five years ago, I decided to give writing a try. I now have 24 novels that I've never shared with anyone. This past year, I came up with the Killing Cupid series and this is the first book. I know my writing is different from most and I'm a little freaked out to have others reading one of my stories. Thanks for words of encouragement and I promise the story will pick up soon. There's spaceships, pigs, and gorilla sex coming. Much love and stay safe.
Anonymous
9/15/20, 5:13 PM
great work
9/15/20, 5:12 PM
I really enjoyed this, too. Yes love the protective cup be the equivalent of a mask. And to have the guys that will not wear the cup. I thought it mite be a seal on. Will fall off in 2 weeks. So manny parts i love. thank you. rob
9/15/20, 5:06 PM
Great start cant wait to read more.
9/15/20, 3:59 PM
Looking forward to the next part of this one. I hope it doesn't take too long, but don't rush it :)