Recent Comments

9/15/20, 12:54 PM
omg. new chapter. do i binge read or ration? Who am i kidding? by Prim! tonight we binge! Ps thanks Gymmuscle, a much needed lockdown escape.
9/15/20, 12:47 PM
This is one of those stories that I feel like I could keep on reading the more it progresses, thank you for this good work of writing!
9/15/20, 12:32 PM
Such a creative, humorous, and sexy story!
9/15/20, 10:23 AM
A Mark Goodson/Bill Todman production -- *not*!
Anonymous
9/15/20, 9:25 AM
terrific
9/15/20, 8:46 AM
Loved it! Great premise to have a protective cup be the equivalent of a mask (and to have young men like our protagonists blithely ignoring those safety procedures).
9/15/20, 4:32 AM
i get why the inductions were left out for the most part, making sense because he totally blacks out when under, but I really missed the induction portion of the story. Love the changes to the narrator, would have liked to see more of the degradation of Jackie to his conscious awareness and acceptance of being a huge bottom bitch.
9/15/20, 2:03 AM
me too. definitely underated
9/15/20, 1:37 AM
@Viridian - Unexpected, right? But it’s what came to mind and insisted on being written. @Lusty Stallion - If you watched the movie “Arrival”, it was based on his novella “Story of Your Life”. I’ve got a short story collection of his, and each piece is magnificent in its own special way. @Darmani - I was feeling that too. I don’t view this as a whole story, just a cool idea I wanted to get on paper. @Rawshock - I haven’t seen it - that’s the superhero show on Amazon Prime, right? I kinda picture it as a trauma survivors group meeting or something like that, and ‘Darren’ just wants to help them move on with their new and happy lives.
9/15/20, 1:27 AM
awsome story, i cant wait for the next part