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Anonymous
9/15/20, 9:25 AM
terrific
9/15/20, 8:46 AM
Loved it! Great premise to have a protective cup be the equivalent of a mask (and to have young men like our protagonists blithely ignoring those safety procedures).
9/15/20, 4:32 AM
i get why the inductions were left out for the most part, making sense because he totally blacks out when under, but I really missed the induction portion of the story. Love the changes to the narrator, would have liked to see more of the degradation of Jackie to his conscious awareness and acceptance of being a huge bottom bitch.
9/15/20, 2:03 AM
me too. definitely underated
9/15/20, 1:37 AM
@Viridian - Unexpected, right? But it’s what came to mind and insisted on being written. @Lusty Stallion - If you watched the movie “Arrival”, it was based on his novella “Story of Your Life”. I’ve got a short story collection of his, and each piece is magnificent in its own special way. @Darmani - I was feeling that too. I don’t view this as a whole story, just a cool idea I wanted to get on paper. @Rawshock - I haven’t seen it - that’s the superhero show on Amazon Prime, right? I kinda picture it as a trauma survivors group meeting or something like that, and ‘Darren’ just wants to help them move on with their new and happy lives.
9/15/20, 1:27 AM
awsome story, i cant wait for the next part
9/15/20, 1:25 AM
As for me it reminded me of The Boys, if the collateral damage were hot instead of horrifying. Loved how the reality changes worked, and loved the idea of "counseling" TF victims to embrace their new lives and forget (or at least stop caring) about their old ones!
9/15/20, 12:36 AM
> Pup Scout is ready for his variant... > Your stream of consciousness was excellent! Good writing -- you win. You'll see the Scenter do his thing next chapter!
9/15/20, 12:21 AM
How about Andrew giving James a few interesting or unique fetish's or kinky quirks ???
9/14/20, 11:59 PM
Hmmm, Pup Scout is ready for his variant. We are thinking Scenter or Implanter. PupScout would make a good Scenter. He appreciates the scent of another man, always keeping enough on himself and searching for it on the men he finds attractive. He knows the seductive power of man scent and with that variant, he would use it well to get men to obey him in service to the Great One. But an Implanter. Oh how he loves the stories of mind control and slavery. Forcing a symbiont on a man as he fucks him into everlasting slavery, would be a powerful weapon PupScout would know how to use wisely and well. But my instinct says that PupScout would long to be the one fucked by the Implanter becoming fused with a symbiont and a slave to his Master Implanter forever. So Scenter it is. PupScout will scent other men. They will discover the scent of other men. He will seduce and control with his scent.