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9/15/20, 10:23 AM
A Mark Goodson/Bill Todman production -- *not*!
Anonymous
9/15/20, 9:25 AM
terrific
9/15/20, 8:46 AM
Loved it! Great premise to have a protective cup be the equivalent of a mask (and to have young men like our protagonists blithely ignoring those safety procedures).
9/15/20, 4:32 AM
i get why the inductions were left out for the most part, making sense because he totally blacks out when under, but I really missed the induction portion of the story. Love the changes to the narrator, would have liked to see more of the degradation of Jackie to his conscious awareness and acceptance of being a huge bottom bitch.
9/15/20, 2:03 AM
me too. definitely underated
9/15/20, 1:37 AM
@Viridian - Unexpected, right? But it’s what came to mind and insisted on being written. @Lusty Stallion - If you watched the movie “Arrival”, it was based on his novella “Story of Your Life”. I’ve got a short story collection of his, and each piece is magnificent in its own special way. @Darmani - I was feeling that too. I don’t view this as a whole story, just a cool idea I wanted to get on paper. @Rawshock - I haven’t seen it - that’s the superhero show on Amazon Prime, right? I kinda picture it as a trauma survivors group meeting or something like that, and ‘Darren’ just wants to help them move on with their new and happy lives.
9/15/20, 1:27 AM
awsome story, i cant wait for the next part
9/15/20, 1:25 AM
As for me it reminded me of The Boys, if the collateral damage were hot instead of horrifying. Loved how the reality changes worked, and loved the idea of "counseling" TF victims to embrace their new lives and forget (or at least stop caring) about their old ones!
9/15/20, 12:36 AM
> Pup Scout is ready for his variant... > Your stream of consciousness was excellent! Good writing -- you win. You'll see the Scenter do his thing next chapter!
9/15/20, 12:21 AM
How about Andrew giving James a few interesting or unique fetish's or kinky quirks ???