Recent Comments

Nov 13, 2008
Nutiper
9/14/20, 2:29 AM
Hey Delicious1papaya! I just saw your comment -- I'm glad you enjoyed this story! It's a very old story for me, written when I was much younger. I'm glad it's still able to find its fans. In regards to the "happy ending" tag, that is 100% my invention, haha. I also tagged that one other story you saw with "happy ending" -- I had a goal to go through and apply that tag to more stories, honestly. But then I got distracted and forgot all about it, until just now. There are plenty of stories on this site which could use that tag, I think (including everything written by the author "Happy Endings"). So it seemed like a useful tag in general, especially when looking for fun and cozy stories that still play with MC-related kinks.
9/14/20, 2:02 AM
Love this story. I'd like to see Danny get sucked into sexual situations with other men who've serviced Phil's cock. Maybe Danny watches another brainwashed family member suck his cock and take it up the ass, then Phil leaves and the only way for Danny to satisfy his craving is to service the holes of the man his brother has put his penis in.
Lusty Stallion
9/13/20, 10:45 PM
Fucking loved it man. Can't wait to read the rest.
9/13/20, 9:35 PM
i liked that moment where he said he thought of him as an alpha and teach his sons like that, so, since he is actually a beta, he will be in charge to make his sons as beta as well, is only natural to make amends his mistakes, it would also please his alpha
Mark
9/13/20, 9:14 PM
Amazing! Loved this.
Marc
9/13/20, 8:11 PM
Nice and hot story! I love the 2 years long trance and transformation. Great work!
9/13/20, 7:54 PM
will we see a part 3 soon?
9/13/20, 5:59 PM
Thanks everybody for your comments. Usually I'm a lazy person but reading that you're interested in the story push me to keep writing. I see different opinions about if Bob should keep being an Alpha or he should fully submit to Dan. Sadly I can't please everyone, but remember that there's more Alphas to mess with, Bob it's just the beginning. @BobbyBlobfish. Yes!, the mental gymnastics are great as a final result but it's a pain in the ass to wrote it (at least for me). @Erratic101. At this point of the story Bob could be considered that he's already the slut of the house. As far as I know, he's the only member of the family that loves sucking Alpha cock. But will Dan further his corruption? Will Bob be programmed to be a cumdump, and offer his ass to the other members of the house? Only time could tell @Heru Kane. I always enjoy your comments!. Sadly I will spoil that one those suggestion won't be used (at least) in Bob's story arch. I like to give Dan (and myself as the writer) a challenge so giving Bob a trigger word that let Dan use it constantly it would be to easy. About your question. I already have an idea about what I want with each character, it could be changing as I advance in the story but at this point I would love to write some family fun. I want to believe that I will keep my drive to write to that point of the story.
9/13/20, 5:53 PM
+1 to all what Heru Kane said. to everything
Limbo
9/13/20, 4:55 PM
Every chapter is awesome. Please don't stop writing. As for my suggestions: 1. Will think that it's normal for an Alpha to fuck around another Alpha. 2. Will know that an Alpha always speaks the truth. 3. Dan is always true so any memories conflicting with what he says will be forgotten.