Recent Comments

9/14/20, 7:38 PM
I enjoyed this whole story. Thank you for writing it.
9/14/20, 7:04 PM
That sound like an interesting story! Are you planning on writing more her one day?
Anonymous
9/14/20, 6:40 PM
surprisingly not a bad read. even tho the whole story is in one paragraph. haha
9/14/20, 6:28 PM
While this story is very well written I'm left trying to figure out what it has to do, so far in the two parts posted, with most of its tags or the overall theme of this board?
Anonymous
9/14/20, 2:03 PM
I live to serve the Virus.
9/14/20, 2:03 PM
This was really well done! Awesome work, maybe that shop could pop up again?!
9/14/20, 12:35 PM
Thank you for the feedback! I had an exam today so running a bit behind 🤣 part 3 is coming soon promise!!
Boston Satyr
9/14/20, 10:55 AM
this is a great series! creative & fun! love the devilish djinn!
Anonymous
9/14/20, 10:27 AM
Erratic101 have to agree with him, this series needs MORE slaves......
9/14/20, 10:22 AM
Congratulations on your first story. Your idea is really interesting, but i have to agree with the other reviews: It needs pacing, and some spelling & grammar help. The biggest thing that stuck out for me was how little of the character was present in the story.