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9/13/20, 5:53 PM
+1 to all what Heru Kane said. to everything
Limbo
9/13/20, 4:55 PM
Every chapter is awesome. Please don't stop writing. As for my suggestions: 1. Will think that it's normal for an Alpha to fuck around another Alpha. 2. Will know that an Alpha always speaks the truth. 3. Dan is always true so any memories conflicting with what he says will be forgotten.
9/13/20, 4:50 PM
I really loved it. it's a great story. please do some more of this story
Ron
9/13/20, 4:45 PM
I live to serve the virus.
9/13/20, 4:07 PM
Would love Bob to still be an Alpha but only submissive to Dan so the 3 suggestion would probably be something like: 1. A true Alpha doesn't care what other people think 2. Listen to Dan to become a true Alpha 3. Proud to serve Dan as a fellow Alpha
9/13/20, 3:59 PM
Good chapter. I liked the resistance but the submission, and the twist of him being a pushy bottom. I really like the beers leading to him going back under hypnosis. I think one slot should be taken up by implanting a word to bring Bob under a hypnosis trance. Maybe a second command to make Bob like being hypnotized and think that it would be good for others to be hypnotized by Dan too. The final command can be something like sucking cock removes all worries and concerns and fills him with bliss, happiness, and feelings of being a good boy for Dan. I definitely think Dan should stop Bob from the whole pushy bottom thing, and instead make him a submissive bottom. I could also see a transition so that the three men are Alphas, but Dan is an alpha of alphas, a master, and that makes him automatically a different class of being. Its okay for alphas to be 'good boys' for a master, its natural and right. Its good for an alpha to serve, to spread legs and present holes, and to use mouths for and on master. Anyway, this is great. I like the little streak of rebellion followed by the submission followed by Dan taking Bob deeper. Looking forward to seeing the other two being taken down and made good boys for Dan. Oh, as a question, is this story going to have Dan be with Bob and his sons individually, or is there a potential for the three to also fool around with each other too. (I should note if so the idea does not bother me one iota, but I figured I'd ask.)
9/13/20, 3:49 PM
Wrestlr is the standard everyone else is trying to reach. Thanks for another gem.
Anonymous
9/13/20, 3:34 PM
i live to serve the virus
Anonymous
9/13/20, 3:09 PM
i live to serve the virus
9/13/20, 2:56 PM
one of my favorites! excellent work!