Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/13/20, 2:49 PM
This is so enjoyable and genuinely sweet. These are the kind of whore stories I like... Now more about the piggy and narsty stuff...
9/13/20, 1:15 PM
absolutely LOVE the foot fetish angle and the conflict of his newfound desires!
9/13/20, 12:32 PM
Bob should be the slut of the house. He thought his sons to be the alpha he's the alpha of the family. It should soon be the reciprocate of it making him the slave of the family
Anonymous
9/13/20, 12:06 PM
I think Dan should program Bob to be exactly how Bob talks about women: a feminized sissy slut. He thinks girls/betas are only good for cleaning and fucking? Well, turn him into exactly that: a small cock slut that just wants to serve
9/13/20, 11:46 AM
i think this is is a good length for stories. any shorter and i feel they are rushed. i wouldn't be opposed to longer ones.
9/13/20, 11:33 AM
> I’ll call you the Dickens of gay porn. > I thought the coincidence of Tully hitting Snake's bike in Quebec would qualify as Dickensian.
9/13/20, 11:04 AM
I think you're more the Tolstoy of gay porn. Although if, say, Snake turns out to be Tully's long-lost father, I'll call you the Dickens of gay porn.
9/13/20, 10:56 AM
Uh, I would probably feel the same, in Bob's situation. I really like how his brain took the suggestion, it's not often you read about the one sucking try to be a power bottom. So for the orders, I'm not sure what could they be... Feeling sexual joy in sucking an alpha's cook and being submissive to the alpha of the house, perhaps, and for the third, wanting to take it in the house? Enjoy the videos Dan show him? Enjoying serving while still being an alpha? (the mental gymnastic for the last one would be fascinating to read but a probably hard to write)
9/13/20, 10:44 AM
> I’ve always been a fan of this and can’t wait to see where it goes! > Me, too! It took me four chapters to cycle through all the subplots and reintroduce the cast. Whatever else this behemoth has, it's got a lot of characters. I feel a little like the Dostoyevski of gay porn. In this case, I know where I want to end up, but haven't worked out all the details yet of how I'm going to get there. As I did the first time I worked on this series, I'm letting the characters tell me what's next. So far, that seems to be working. Thank you for hanging in -- we'll see what happens together!
9/13/20, 10:18 AM
> The diversion from the narrative was fantastic. I smiled all the way through it thinking, “I want to be able to write like this one day.” > This Narrative Diversion (and the one in Chapter 9) is my Tom Robbins influence. Clearly I was reading something of his at the time to so clearly emulate his voice. I've always admired the way he plays with words and constructs his ideas. To me, the narrative break underscores how lost I was as an author -- how I felt I was losing control. I tried very hard to get rid of these breaks (here and next chapter) and I successfully edited them down, but couldn't rid myself of them completely -- there is vital information contained in both. I just feel they disrupt the flow. Glad you like it! > Now to jerk off to this and in the spirit of the story, I’m using coconut oil. > Hahaha! Well done!