Recent Comments

9/13/20, 1:32 AM
I've waited so long for this series to be continued, i can wait for more. I've always been a fan of this and can't wait to see where it goes!
9/13/20, 1:05 AM
Damn, I loved that! From beginning to end. The diversion from the narrative was fantastic. I smiled all the way through it thinking, "I want to be able to write like this one day." And another evolution about to take place. Hot hot hot...a 5 starrer in all categories! Now to jerk off to this and in the spirit of the story, I'm using coconut oil.
9/12/20, 11:02 PM
That was a really sweet ending which is unusual for this site. Well done.
9/12/20, 10:41 PM
The classic chloroform tactic is back! I really missed this element from your stories, and I'm so glad you posted twice this month! Always a treat to have your stories on the site and I'm looking forward for more!
NZdom
9/12/20, 10:24 PM
this is so hot ! love the mental torture. looking forward to more of your writing :)
9/12/20, 9:56 PM
Very hot story! I like the way you're expanding upon Edlam's story. Looking forward to more...
9/12/20, 9:04 PM
This is awesome. Keep it going!
9/12/20, 8:54 PM
Wow, this is a really hot idea! Since you asked for feedback, my main suggestion would be to slow down and spend more time in-scene than in summary. It felt like things were a little rushed from midway through onwards.
9/12/20, 8:11 PM
I can hardly wait for part 3 !!! Though I'm no into the foot fetish stuff [I understand it's the author's story, so it's o.k.], BUT JUST LOVE the part where Phil has made Danny feel totally inadequate..hope this story line is expanded..Very hot !!!
9/12/20, 7:38 PM
Thanks for the feedback so far. Rob is a narcissistic sociopath. If you were duped by him, like Ryan was... well contact me, and maybe I should write the next story about you ;).