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9/11/20, 2:47 PM
I'm so excited with this story 15 years in the making. Love some family fun time and I can't wait for the next chapter. Well, I guess we've waited years, so I can wait a bit longer. Thanks again for the brilliant chapter!
9/11/20, 2:43 PM
I was honestly a little worried when I read the first two sections, because it seemed to be starting off very slow. (And I think I would have been happier if Mrs. Lenoldi had stayed off the canvas entirely; her presence in the household only messed with my suspension of disbelief). But the pace started to pick up by the end of this installment, and some of the new developments, like the Variants, got me really excited to see what comes next. I'm just a little sad that the action is now shifting from the largely-transformed Indiana town where the Lenoldis and Mr. Mac live. I would have liked to have seen more vivid descriptions of what a community is like when nearly all the men have been transformed by Symbionts and they no longer need to hide their urge to fuck and repopulate. Maybe I'll have to write that story someday :-)
9/11/20, 2:43 PM
Great start to a new season! Mr Mac's three boys are a particularly hot touch. So glad to see this continue.
Anonymous
9/11/20, 2:17 PM
Keep Bob oblivious and think his changing mental gymnastics about sucking cock is completely rational given Dan as *the* Alpha.
Anonymous
9/11/20, 2:16 PM
yo imagine if it was just a rick roll
9/11/20, 1:46 PM
I'm really liking the story so far. I love how the more he uses the ring the more depraved he is getting.
9/11/20, 1:29 PM
Nice, clear, direct writing. Definitely interested to see what comes next.
9/11/20, 1:10 PM
more of Bob!!!!! make him as the slave of the family!
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9/11/20, 11:02 AM
a most enjoyable story. It would be nice to see more of how Alex is changed from his experience. The ending felt abrupt. Just having another segment or 2 showing the interaction between Cody and Alex would be useful in that regard.
9/11/20, 10:09 AM
> I’ve gotta say, the fellow who borrowed the idea, the one where the gov stepped in and made the symbiots into rubber drones and killed off the great one with round up… he had a good story too. Kinda hoped he’d continue his version too. Like alternate universes… > That's my boy rubbrsome -- I love what he's been doing, too. (it's been a hot minute since we've heard from him -- I hope he's well.) He let me preview that story before he posted it and I loved it! (There's a cool argument to be made about why we assume the aliens would only pollinate humans -- rubbrsome ran w that.) Yes, I look at it as an alternate future... or maybe it's not.