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Anonymous
9/11/20, 8:20 AM
i live to serve the virus
Jul 30, 2020
9/11/20, 8:09 AM
Wow! I don't understand why he went through the transformation but who cares about his motivations! He's going to get a lot of dick! :-P
9/11/20, 7:31 AM
Now I've the image in my head of Dave in wolf form wearing just the collar and his football armor. Maybe someday, he and Nate will have a game.
Evan
9/11/20, 7:29 AM
I really love this series, thanks for releasing another chapter. This was a really sweet one. I am so happy he won't be lonely any more.
9/11/20, 6:48 AM
awww, puppy... Luke needs to learn he won't be alone. I also really like the mental image of werewolf playing board-game RPGs, that sound hilarious AND adorable. Adrian might want a pack of servants, but he care about them, I like that a lot! Also, the stories on your Wordpress look promising, I'll dig in later.
9/11/20, 6:37 AM
i hate when i get really into an old story cause i never know if there will be a satisfying ending or not. i wish there was more
9/11/20, 6:32 AM
@gaybird No please! GET SPECIFIC. School's Out used to be a one shot, then the comments section showed so much love and interest and I was inspired enough to bang out a whole other chapter! It was amazing, but no one really gave me a direction and because of that I wrote what I wondered about, and it didn't recieve nearly as well. If another chapter is to be written, I need directions that people want to explore with me. So far everyone wants to see Benji's storyline close out, as well as more aspects of student life in the school. BlondieBoy mentioned liking the first half with Cody, and not much other specifics have been given thus far, so guess what the in prog of School's Out 3 looks like? How did Cody get that number and password? I'm a feedback junkie. Feed me. I give stories in return.
ThatOneGayFur
9/11/20, 6:26 AM
I love this! Make me a pup too!!!!
9/11/20, 6:15 AM
@gaybird Please don't ever feel odd commenting, I love each one. I enjoy being able to write with the mental voice from a character. Little details like how a character mentally starts capitalizing and lowercasing words to denote power shifts always did it for me as a reader, so I attempted to emulate that as a writer. I had to go back and re-read several times to make sure after a certain point that I didn't use hard numerical terms because the limited 3rd person POV no longer knew what those were. I REALLY wanted to use the word penetrated in the sex scene but realized immediately that Slaveboy would NEVER be able to remember that word, so I got to play with language a bit. It made it fun and I ended up taking the whole project a bit more seriously than maybe I should have since I was so completely dedicated to properly conveying the new mental state that Master had made. In the next chapter, Master's narrative voice is so different that it practically reads like a totally separate story, and he has a horrid tendency to jump around from subject to subject without properly explaining the whole context and being generally confusing, but I'm working on that. I ALMOST want to leave it so haphazard, because it actually is his mental voice, but I can't stand it also. I want the story to read well. The relationship between 'Zane and Master' and 'Slaveboy and Master' are two entirely different things and it's really interesting to find how one man refers to another in two distinct ways. Master's relationship with Slaveboy is affectionate and sweet, if rooted in something unhealthy. Master's opinion of Zane is damn distasteful. I hope as I give more of this story, you will continue to enjoy it.
9/11/20, 6:10 AM
Adding to my favourites. I loved the premise and the ripple effects.