Recent Comments

9/11/20, 2:43 PM
Great start to a new season! Mr Mac's three boys are a particularly hot touch. So glad to see this continue.
Anonymous
9/11/20, 2:17 PM
Keep Bob oblivious and think his changing mental gymnastics about sucking cock is completely rational given Dan as *the* Alpha.
Anonymous
9/11/20, 2:16 PM
yo imagine if it was just a rick roll
9/11/20, 1:46 PM
I'm really liking the story so far. I love how the more he uses the ring the more depraved he is getting.
9/11/20, 1:29 PM
Nice, clear, direct writing. Definitely interested to see what comes next.
9/11/20, 1:10 PM
more of Bob!!!!! make him as the slave of the family!
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9/11/20, 11:02 AM
a most enjoyable story. It would be nice to see more of how Alex is changed from his experience. The ending felt abrupt. Just having another segment or 2 showing the interaction between Cody and Alex would be useful in that regard.
9/11/20, 10:09 AM
> I’ve gotta say, the fellow who borrowed the idea, the one where the gov stepped in and made the symbiots into rubber drones and killed off the great one with round up… he had a good story too. Kinda hoped he’d continue his version too. Like alternate universes… > That's my boy rubbrsome -- I love what he's been doing, too. (it's been a hot minute since we've heard from him -- I hope he's well.) He let me preview that story before he posted it and I loved it! (There's a cool argument to be made about why we assume the aliens would only pollinate humans -- rubbrsome ran w that.) Yes, I look at it as an alternate future... or maybe it's not.
9/11/20, 10:04 AM
> I’ve read long ago about programs that scriptwriters use to help plot outlines and keep a handle on what’s going on. > Plotting is one of my favorite parts of the writing process! I don't want AI doing it for me. Thing is, for me, the plot comes first, which it clearly did not in BOOK ONE. That's what complicated this. Fortunately, I figured it out!
Anonymous
9/11/20, 8:39 AM
i live to serve the virus