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Ng5hvlo4
9/11/20, 11:02 AM
a most enjoyable story. It would be nice to see more of how Alex is changed from his experience. The ending felt abrupt. Just having another segment or 2 showing the interaction between Cody and Alex would be useful in that regard.
9/11/20, 10:09 AM
> I’ve gotta say, the fellow who borrowed the idea, the one where the gov stepped in and made the symbiots into rubber drones and killed off the great one with round up… he had a good story too. Kinda hoped he’d continue his version too. Like alternate universes… > That's my boy rubbrsome -- I love what he's been doing, too. (it's been a hot minute since we've heard from him -- I hope he's well.) He let me preview that story before he posted it and I loved it! (There's a cool argument to be made about why we assume the aliens would only pollinate humans -- rubbrsome ran w that.) Yes, I look at it as an alternate future... or maybe it's not.
9/11/20, 10:04 AM
> I’ve read long ago about programs that scriptwriters use to help plot outlines and keep a handle on what’s going on. > Plotting is one of my favorite parts of the writing process! I don't want AI doing it for me. Thing is, for me, the plot comes first, which it clearly did not in BOOK ONE. That's what complicated this. Fortunately, I figured it out!
Anonymous
9/11/20, 8:39 AM
i live to serve the virus
Anonymous
9/11/20, 8:20 AM
i live to serve the virus
Jul 30, 2020
9/11/20, 8:09 AM
Wow! I don't understand why he went through the transformation but who cares about his motivations! He's going to get a lot of dick! :-P
9/11/20, 7:31 AM
Now I've the image in my head of Dave in wolf form wearing just the collar and his football armor. Maybe someday, he and Nate will have a game.
Evan
9/11/20, 7:29 AM
I really love this series, thanks for releasing another chapter. This was a really sweet one. I am so happy he won't be lonely any more.
9/11/20, 6:48 AM
awww, puppy... Luke needs to learn he won't be alone. I also really like the mental image of werewolf playing board-game RPGs, that sound hilarious AND adorable. Adrian might want a pack of servants, but he care about them, I like that a lot! Also, the stories on your Wordpress look promising, I'll dig in later.
9/11/20, 6:37 AM
i hate when i get really into an old story cause i never know if there will be a satisfying ending or not. i wish there was more