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9/11/20, 4:39 AM
oh. oh i really really like this. i feel odd leaving a comment because i feel like everything i want to say has already been said? but its such a clever idea, and the changing in voice as the protagonist gets dumbed down is done so smoothly! i also love how the stranger is written and his odd little cheerful salesman-like qualities. AND i love stories where the protagonist is made dumber in some aspects but not others. like, they're a bit slow and can't really read or count but they're not far enough gone that they feel like an infant. and this really hits that nail on the head in that respect. also i know stories like this aren't meant to be That Deep and they're mostly just supposed to be sexy but i can't help feeling like i kind of want to know everything about these characters. partially because i'm a sap and i love romance, even though a romance like this wouldn't be exactly realistic healthy or sustainable, but also partially because, again, the voices are so fresh and fun that i want to spend a lot of time with them. anyways, i'm rambling, but suffice it to say if you ever write more of this i'll be there in a heartbeat
9/11/20, 4:35 AM
Fucking brilliant!
Anonymous
9/11/20, 4:11 AM
i live to serve the virus
9/11/20, 3:31 AM
fucking hot. can't get enough of this side of the story!!!
9/11/20, 3:13 AM
@Dayle - In that scenario, Aiden would have become the new master and the old orders would be erased. That was my second favorite possible ending and yeah, Aiden would have been much nicer than Cody.
9/11/20, 3:05 AM
You might have been making it up, but it became a cohesive story and one that many of us enjoyed reading. I always hoped there'd be a sequel, so many possibilities. I've gotta say, the fellow who borrowed the idea, the one where the gov stepped in and made the symbiots into rubber drones and killed off the great one with round up... he had a good story too. Kinda hoped he'd continue his version too. Like alternate universes...
9/11/20, 2:51 AM
what wouldve happened if Aiden put the collar back on- Does that erase Codys influence over Alex and now Aiden has control? The dynamics between Aiden and Alex wouldve been amazing. Alex I believe wouldve accepted Aidens control over him in more of a Boytfriend aspect rather than a Slave-Master relationship.
9/11/20, 2:25 AM
Hot! Loved the time jump in the end and the butt plug ultimatum.
Anonymous
9/11/20, 2:06 AM
Great story, and great finale!