Recent Comments

9/11/20, 2:00 AM
A very hot start, keep it up. The writing was good, I'd say your opening disclaimer is the weaker part, but doesn't detract from the story. Just add some sort of separator between that and the story proper.
9/11/20, 1:54 AM
That's a sweet, warm happy ending. Good work on your first story on this site, Pawn! I'd have to say that although there were some parts in between that were not particular of my tastes, all in all it was a series that was well written, and the plots flowed relatively smoothly along the way. Keep up the good work and hope to read more of your work on here in the future!
9/11/20, 1:45 AM
Absaman, 15 years later, this story still blows my mind and remains one of my greatest fantasies. So glad to see you coming back to it and giving us more still. It may have gone out of control, as you say, but in a way, that made it so much hotter. Thank you for sharing your stories, and trust that we're still here desiring more.
9/11/20, 1:24 AM
I'd really enjoy seeing the differences between the two brother's isolation periods. So far I'm excited for where this story can grow into. Your grasp of english is actually pretty decent. Keep up the good work!
nycboot
9/11/20, 1:10 AM
I know people in the forum have spoken about how artificial intelligence program can help write stories. But I've read long ago about programs that scriptwriters use to help plot outlines and keep a handle on what's going on. This enables scriptwriters to create more complex plots. I don't know what these programs are called....maybe another reader does.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/11/20, 12:50 AM
Freedom is one thing, it doesn't sound like anything has really changed. Another option might be if wearer makes a 100 percent sincere apology to whoever put it on & owner knows it is (maybe through a warm feeling or something) then collar would have had a positive change in that relationship. Myself, if somebody tossed a collar on my neck, I would never ask for it to be removed.
9/10/20, 11:15 PM
Congrats on a job well done for the ending! I hope you post stories again in the future
9/10/20, 11:07 PM
I really hope you put the other ending as well cause now I'm interested-
Mark
9/10/20, 11:01 PM
Loved this series. Thank you for your contributions and for having a clear conclusion. I hope you continue to write!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/10/20, 10:58 PM
I need this kind of special delivery service immediately (if not sooner). I have all sorts of locking gear here, just need ANYBODY to lock me in & take over those pesty keys.