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9/10/20, 6:39 PM
I can't wait for more! I hope he keeps being a good boy
9/10/20, 5:25 PM
I really enjoyed this story! It was kind of sweet and again, really well written!
9/10/20, 4:28 PM
> What a cliffhanger! And you’ve kept us hanging on that cliff for about 15 years now. > > A cliffhanger of 15 years. I am very excited to see it continue. > I know! It's going to be like waking up after a coma. The truth is when I finished BOOK ONE in 2006, I was pretty much done with this series, over it. I'd been writing it for the better part of a year and I felt it was all terribly out of control -- my own fault, I had no plot for it. I was making it up as I went along -- I freely confess that. So I had been sort of dreading returning to it for years, especially because I didn't know what I wanted to do with it. That said, I'm honestly surprised at how much fun I've been having playing in this garden again. As I write this comment, I'm about five chapters in to the new material and I haven't been getting anywhere closer to any kind of plot resolution. I'm worried I'm going to be writing a BOOK THREE about this time next year. Shudder. Here's one difference: I've actually had to start keeping track of my plot threads, especially now, as they start to dovetail into each other. It's been a LONG TIME since I've actually had to write a plot down. But in BOOK ONE where I was just tracing the line (branch) of the symbionts-takeover, I was spreading out -- in BOOK TWO, I'm trying to craft something out of it, and I'm bringing it all together. I'm legit excited for you all to take the journey with me -- and I love hearing myself say that about this story!
9/10/20, 4:07 PM
A cliffhanger of 15 years. I am very excited to see it continue.
9/10/20, 3:51 PM
What a cliffhanger! And you've kept us hanging on that cliff for about 15 years now.
9/10/20, 1:19 PM
> Mike Milano’s transformation in the stand-alone version is almost better than any of those in the series > They had a way bigger budget for the movie.
9/10/20, 1:17 PM
> ...the power of the Great One seems to be able to make Murdock orgasm and more. > I really want to emphasize the "and more" part of your statement. The next time we see Murdock (chapter 13, I think), we'll see just how much more.
9/10/20, 1:12 PM
Really neat concept, and very hot! Loved the reveal that it had been going on so long he didn't have a job anymore. Something about that made the scenario even hotter. I wish the protagonist didn't lose his mind to the point that we don't get to see what's going on in there. I love when stories get into the sub's headspace and we get to read about their sensory experience while getting mindfucked. Also, a couple of logistics weren't super clear to me. Like, what was the distinction between what the dom had to do last time vs this time? Was there a difference in how easily the sub went under this time vs the last time vs the first time? You're hinting that there was, but the detail are fuzzy, and trying to figure it out kind of kicked me out of the fantasy. Regardless, I really liked this story. Great work! :D
nycboot
9/10/20, 12:43 PM
Totally agree with El Mexicano 4091. And I can tell you're aware of repeating yourself @absman420 so you never give us as detailed view of the transformation as in the earliest chapters (actually I think your description of Mike Milano's transformation in the stand-alone version is almost better than any of those in the series). I love how the power of the Great One seems to be able to make Murdock orgasm and more. Can't wait to read more (and j/o more!). :)
9/10/20, 12:13 PM
A very hot episode. How about a guy bullying a college nerd. The nerd becomes an uber muscle bear daddy and the bully his loyal cub? how about the simple chaos of going to the most jockish frat on a university campus and simply adding the phrase "The All Gay Frat" to the sign out front and watch the changes. The guys would all be hot gay jocks. I'm enjoying the series. Great Mpreg scene!