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Anonymous
9/10/20, 6:41 AM
why dont you slow down and focus on one guy changing at a time and maybe not. like it take a couple minutes to happen?
9/10/20, 6:15 AM
It's an interesting conflict that I hope comes up again. Telling Dave to stop would only draw more attention to them, but it would be the right thing to do.
Anonymous
9/10/20, 6:04 AM
I live to serve the virus
9/10/20, 5:53 AM
I live to serve the virus
giveintothemusk
9/10/20, 5:29 AM
What a twist! Been such a great series. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘
9/10/20, 5:19 AM
Nice, I love big men fall as victims, turned into bottom of less manly or big ones lol Perhaps the 3rd suggestion was a bit too much in my opinion, something along the lines with "will ask Dan for relaxation" or "take more pills" so he can make him watch more would work better with your intention or was it like this so Dan can see if some order can be challenged?
9/10/20, 4:43 AM
Great story so far! At this point I'm more interested than anything to see how it all turns out. Revenge and violence and pain aren't really my thing, but the characters are keeping me so interested.
9/10/20, 3:47 AM
So fucking hot!
9/10/20, 3:26 AM
Loved the concept and world you built. Looking forward to seeing this developed as intended. Any update on the progress of making this into chapters? Willing to help edit if needed.
9/10/20, 3:16 AM
I live to serve the Virus