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9/10/20, 12:13 PM
A very hot episode. How about a guy bullying a college nerd. The nerd becomes an uber muscle bear daddy and the bully his loyal cub? how about the simple chaos of going to the most jockish frat on a university campus and simply adding the phrase "The All Gay Frat" to the sign out front and watch the changes. The guys would all be hot gay jocks. I'm enjoying the series. Great Mpreg scene!
9/10/20, 11:46 AM
Points to you for using the negative space between lines to create pacing, solid story work as well. I've done hypnosis and in my experience text based hypnosis doesn't do much for me. Still, story well written, best of luck to you in the contest!
Ravenclaw
9/10/20, 9:31 AM
that was really good. cant wait for more.
9/10/20, 9:12 AM
I've been working on it every chance I got and the first chapter should be up soon as long as September doesn't become concentrated 2020 like August did. I had so many people who needed my help and so much that needed to be done that I could only get the time to work on this infrequently. Thanks for the offer but the editing is the thing that has been giving me the least problems. The biggest bottleneck has been my decision to divide up the first day into multiple chapters. Some scenes are easy to place but I keep changing my mind on which others should be placed where in between them. The first day is going to be 3 to 5 chapters depending on exactly which order I end up deciding on. My brain also gave me an idea for the pandemic challenge so I will need to devote more time to it this month due to the deadline. I will be publishing the first (and maybe second) chapter(s) before I switch over to it though. Can't work on a new challenge while this unholy monster still haunts my nightmares after all.
Anonymous
9/10/20, 8:33 AM
i love your work!!!
Fafa
9/10/20, 8:31 AM
Nice story love the transformations. Add some twink ones.
JuG
9/10/20, 8:29 AM
excellent!
Mark
9/10/20, 7:27 AM
Can't wait for the last part!
Anonymous
9/10/20, 6:41 AM
why dont you slow down and focus on one guy changing at a time and maybe not. like it take a couple minutes to happen?
9/10/20, 6:15 AM
It's an interesting conflict that I hope comes up again. Telling Dave to stop would only draw more attention to them, but it would be the right thing to do.