Recent Comments

1/10/25, 12:56 PM
This is such a well thought out and fantastically written story with so much depth! Marvelous job!

1/10/25, 2:20 PM
@[monarch_mvl118](/user/show/28683) Thank you! I hope it continues to meet your expectations! Working on editing and fixing part three now!
1/10/25, 1:59 PM
Really fun fantasy worldbuildling, love the immersive descriptions of the magic and the fresh spin on demons. Just wish there had been a lot more sex, and less horror tamping down what sex there was. If that's coming later, excited for future chapters!
10/5/24, 11:13 PM
Love the story But I hate Alphas like Sammy. He is not a good person. He did that to tach his sub of a brother to never talk back to him. He told him he hated the world with weak subs like him, that he could easily order and muscle around. Just like he through him in the hall way to be raped. He said no. Then the guy kept gong because he moaned. That’s still rape. That’s why young mean today are going to jail. He could have taught him that his way a true slut another way, but he wanted him to know he could take over his life at any moment. Love and Hate Sammy. You monster.

1/10/25, 1:51 PM
@[SacGuy](/user/show/10054871) It sounds like you dislike the story not being to your personal expectations and taste. It's cool to not care for something but denigrating the writer for not meeting expectations isn't.
1/10/25, 1:05 PM
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
mic
1/10/25, 12:37 PM
so fucking hot, nice tricked seduced to slurp cum, please more, great, hope he enslaves lock him in chasity, shrinks his dick, and the brother uses films him and mason uses him under the bleachers , ties him to pole let him suck him and others and they paint his face white and all guys film for security
1/10/25, 12:31 PM
Jack, you are the master at getting and keeping my attention. No matter the genre, you have me hook, line, and sinker.
Anonymous
1/10/25, 9:52 AM
Well, this story needs to continue. Great changes so far. Don't go so easy on Dylan. He needs to feel and understand what he's done, and internalize the consequences. He's removed 90% of his hair and gotten his first tattoo, but he should definitely start epilating his head as part of his daily grooming routine monotonously yet conscientiously and planning his schedule around tattoo appointments.
1/10/25, 7:13 AM
Weird but strangely hot, and even kind of funny, in a comic horror way.
Aug 29, 2005
1/10/25, 4:32 AM
One of the first straight to gay stories I read. Formative for me.