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Lusty Stallion
9/9/20, 9:19 PM
Thanks anon. He sure would. Do note how I haven't yet mentioned colour of skin other than bronze. I have an asian idea to play with but I probably should have added that Ned was black in my imagonation along with a few of the side charachters. Any particular ethnic requests guys?
9/9/20, 9:18 PM
Stunning. Simply stunning work... read the whole thing today... fantastic.
marc
9/9/20, 9:16 PM
NICE WORK.......be interesting to see where u take it from here
9/9/20, 9:06 PM
I live to serve the Virus.
Anonymous
9/9/20, 8:59 PM
hot as hell! keep it up dude!
marc
9/9/20, 8:52 PM
HOT
9/9/20, 8:47 PM
> Argh, this slow drip is driving me insane! Patience is a virtue, I guess… Please, keep it coming! > I will, though once we get to the new stuff in BOOK TWO, I'll slow down to one chapter a week. > Side note: one of the hottest/most interesting features of the Pollination world is the transformation process > Agreed, though I think we only see it two or three times (completely) within these pages. As a writer, there's nothing I hate worse than "Chapter 3: the same thing happens to a third guy" -- so I work very hard to keep it original, including ways to make you, the reader, imagine it.
9/9/20, 8:17 PM
This is a really great story! I mainly enjoyed your sense of humour and I really like how you thought the whole concept into every detail. The story itself is really cute as well - you convey skillfully how much they love each other. And then they had sex! ;-)
9/9/20, 8:15 PM
Argh, this slow drip is driving me insane! Patience is a virtue, I guess... Please, keep it coming! Side note: one of the hottest/most interesting features of the Pollination world is the transformation process, beginning with the man finding a flower and ending with him accepting his Symbiont. I think it's one of the best parts of the story, watching a man go from initially surprised at/nervous about what's happening to enjoying the rush/growth and transformation into a muscled hulk to feeling compelled to accept his Symbiont. I've always wondered what it would look like from the perspective of the man who's experiencing it, his internal monologue, etc. Maybe that's a question for a different story, though!
Anonymous
9/9/20, 8:06 PM
Awesome so far! :) Looking forward to more