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9/10/20, 2:01 AM
One chapter left!
9/10/20, 1:59 AM
This story, idea, and execution are perfect.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/10/20, 1:57 AM
I wish I could submit like that when anyone says "Simon says".
9/10/20, 1:50 AM
Very awesome chapter. You're really getting good at this! Can I ask how many more chapters you're planning to make?
Underwearguy72
9/10/20, 12:56 AM
Love the story, awesome plot and great writing. Can't wait to see what happens next. Any chance that Van might become more interested or change up the underwear that Jake or Carson wears, or even Jared for that matter? Just a thought. Great writing.
Anonymous
9/9/20, 11:41 PM
Hahahha love the oblivious controller.
Anonymous
9/9/20, 10:34 PM
Would love to see some hot Arab stallions or some Indian hunks :-D
9/9/20, 10:24 PM
awwww you make them so cute, your cocks! :-)
9/9/20, 9:42 PM
Thank you for the feedback! It's really encouraging to hear from everyone who takes the time to comment. For those of you who are giving me low ratings (especially in the writing category), please leave a comment and let me know what didn't work for you. I want to grow as a writer, so constructive criticism is welcome. @NANOwriter: he won't, but there's a whole world of other mistakes he can make, so... @EJG: I actually get off on body transformation and cock growth a lot, so stay tuned for more escapades where that's included. (Maybe a Halloween special?) I just needed a break from it after writing myself into a corner in my other series. Otherwise, Ethan's universe mirrors our own, which means a lot of average-sized dicks. @BobbyBlobfish: Ethan is fully vers, so rest assured that his ass will get time to recover. I've got a few ideas for the next chapter, but the one I'm leaning towards most has him encountering a pushy power bottom who really puts his topping skills to the test. (In public, of course) @ForgottenCradle: I'm really glad you like the genre twist! Ethan is like if Kimmy Schmidt and the Purple Man had a love child, which is both fun to write for and a little challenging to convey without resorting to an info-dump that slows down the narrative. Chapter 1 was too subtle, this one might have been too on the nose... we'll see what I come up with for chapter 3. @SillyBoyz: As Ethan says, everybody's usually pretty nice to him :D