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marc
9/9/20, 8:04 PM
nice beginning...looking forward to seeing where u go with this
9/9/20, 7:52 PM
@Boi982229 Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment! As I've said above, I touch on the little ways that Slaveboy must be accommodated due to his lowered intelligence in the next chapter, which I am going to post in a day or two. In a nutshell, Slaveboy is complete because his role perfectly suits him, because he was made to be perfectly suited for the role and nothing else at the wish of his Master. It's a bit neferious for all of the cute moments or hot scenes, but that's what we're here for, is it not? @The Influencer Your praise of my originality in my method of mind control are SO dear to me, I can't even properly express... I agree that there was some dragging in the end, but that's primarily because there didn't USED to be a sex scene in the chapter, but I added one because I realized that the story had called for one blatantly, and I'd previously neglected it. I have a few more chapters on the backlog, and since this one was so well recieved, I can't wait to hear what people think of the next one. @(blank) I wasn't even TRYING to get that word count, but you are quite right that it simply cannot go unremarked. Thank you for enjoying my story enough to comment.
9/9/20, 7:35 PM
this is really a new twist on the unaware genre and I'm here for it. this was a nice chapter. I was quite confused after the first one but the explanation cleared everything up and made it even more exciting
9/9/20, 7:09 PM
This is both hilarious and hot! Also, I wasn't sure if Ethan had supernaturals abilities or not, but yep, definitively magic, and he really need to understand that one of those days, or else it's gonna be one loose ass he's gonna end with. He might appreciate, though.
Anonymous
9/9/20, 7:03 PM
This is so hot! i love the locking outfit
9/9/20, 7:00 PM
Thanks a lot from your comments. @SilentNobody, the "werewolf and the nerd" it's a reference to "Nate and Dave" by Nacho. It's a very good story, a few of the happy ones on here. If you already read it, then leave Nacho a comment maybe it will help the revive the story @Heru Kane, about the third suggestion, I like more the stories where the corruption it's gradual and not a full 180° on personality. My intention it's to go full corruption but at it's time, so I thought that suggestion add some action without being to little or to much. I have some idea where I want to go with the characters (and in this introductory chapter I put some ideas of the future chapters) but I would love to read which other suggestions do you like for Bob and his sons.
9/9/20, 6:52 PM
Very hot story! I'd love to read more
9/9/20, 6:40 PM
I love the idea of this. So looking forward to seeing where this goes. I do wosh the third was a bit less specific on sucking cock so that he comes to like getting fucked and stuff. But yeah this is a nice. Also I'm quite happy to see a dom pov. They seem rare nowadays.
9/9/20, 5:49 PM
Dan's got good taste. The story about the uncle and the chip is one of my favorites,too. And the werewolf boyfriend is such a cute one,great to hear such references. I can't wait for the second chapter.
9/9/20, 5:15 PM
@Sad: you're trying too hard. The term "buck" is often applied to guys of any skin colour to mean that they're particularly lively or spirited. Unless there's really strong reason to believe that it was intended in the more offensive sense (and I don't see skin colour alone as "strong" reason), I think it's best to assume that the former definition is what was intended.